Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "much convenient" should be "more convenient," and "search for information on online" should be "search for information online." Also, avoid repeating similar ideas. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise.

Exemplo: I don't go to the library very often because I find it more convenient to search for information online. For instance, online resources provide up-to-date information quickly, which saves me time compared to visiting the library.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and filler words like "uh" and "umm" that reduce fluency. Also, the sentence structure is a bit awkward. Try to use linking words like "and" or "also" to connect ideas smoothly and avoid unnecessary pauses.

Exemplo: Although I don't visit the library often, when I do, I usually look for articles and journals published by the university. I also check out new books that are relevant to my subject to stay updated.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains many filler words like "uh" which affect fluency. Also, the last sentence is a bit unclear and could be more specific. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details, and avoid fillers.

Exemplo: Yes, I often went to the library as a child because the Internet was not widely available. I read many stories, children's novels, and books that helped me improve my reading skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is informative and includes comparison, which is good. However, there are some grammatical errors such as "children literature" should be "children's literature," and "Chinese kids seems" should be "Chinese kids seem." Also, try to use linking words like "for example" or "in comparison" to improve coherence.

Exemplo: I'm not sure about all Chinese kids, but from my observation, many visit the library frequently. They enjoy reading books, especially novels and children's literature, which helps improve their reading skills. In comparison, children in Nepal seem to have less access to educational resources and spend less time reading.

× Actually, I don't go to library very often because I find it much convenient to search online about the information on the topic rather than visiting the library myself.

✓ Actually, I don't go to the library very often because I find it much more convenient to search online for information on the topic rather than visiting the library myself.

The phrase 'go to library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Also, 'much convenient' should be 'much more convenient' to correctly express comparative degree. Additionally, 'search online about the information' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'for' when searching for information.

× For example, whenever I need to search for information on online, it always gives me up to date information.

✓ For example, whenever I need to search for information online, it always gives me up-to-date information.

The preposition 'on' before 'online' is unnecessary and incorrect; 'search for information online' is the correct form. Also, 'up to date' should be hyphenated as 'up-to-date' when used as an adjective.

× Well, since I don't go to the library very often, but whenever I go there, the things I do is uh, look for the articles or the journals that the university has uh, published and umm, furthermore, I also look for the new books for that is relevant to my subject.

✓ Well, since I don't go to the library very often, whenever I go there, the things I do are, uh, look for the articles or journals that the university has published, and, umm, furthermore, I also look for new books that are relevant to my subject.

The sentence incorrectly combines 'since' and 'but' which creates a sentence structure error. Also, 'the things I do is' should be 'the things I do are' to agree in number. 'For that is relevant' is incorrect; it should be 'that are relevant' to correctly refer to plural 'books'. Commas and conjunctions are adjusted for clarity.

× Actually, I'm not entirely sure about all the Chinese kids, but from what I have observed, many of them visit library quite often.

✓ Actually, I'm not entirely sure about all the Chinese kids, but from what I have observed, many of them visit the library quite often.

The phrase 'visit library' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known in context.

× Compared to children in Nepal, Chinese kids seems to have more access towards the educational resources and spend more time.

✓ Compared to children in Nepal, Chinese kids seem to have more access to educational resources and spend more time.

The subject 'Chinese kids' is plural, so the verb should be 'seem' not 'seems' to agree in number. Also, 'access towards' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'access to'. 'The educational resources' should be 'educational resources' without 'the' unless referring to specific resources.