Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by making it more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "in person or buying the book" which is unclear. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Try to limit your answer to 4-5 sentences and use more precise vocabulary.

Exemplo: No, I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books online or buying them to read at my own pace. I find it more comfortable and convenient to read at home rather than sitting in the library.

Sugestão: Your answer repeats previous ideas and lacks direct response to the question. Try to answer directly first, then add supporting details with linking words. Also, avoid grammatical errors like "have buying" and unclear phrases like "stopped reading the book a long back."

Exemplo: I rarely go to the library, so I don't usually do much there. Instead, I prefer reading books online or at home because it's more comfortable and convenient for me.

Sugestão: Your answer is quite good but can be improved by using correct tenses and linking words for coherence. For example, use past tense consistently and connect ideas smoothly. Also, add a concluding sentence to wrap up your answer.

Exemplo: When I was a kid, I used to go to the school library every week. We didn't usually study books or novels there; instead, we often did sudoku puzzles. I really enjoyed my time there because it was fun and relaxing.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains errors like "liabilities" instead of "libraries" or "habits." Try to answer directly and clearly, using appropriate vocabulary and linking words. Avoid vague statements and be specific if possible.

Exemplo: I'm not sure how often Chinese kids go to the library, but I believe that most children in every country have the habit of visiting libraries to read or study.

× I think I prefer reading books online or in person or buying the book and read on my own pace.

✓ I think I prefer reading books online or in person or buying the book and reading at my own pace.

After 'prefer', when listing activities, the verbs should be in the '-ing' form to maintain parallel structure. 'Read' should be 'reading' to match 'buying' and 'reading books'. Also, 'on my own pace' should be 'at my own pace' (preposition corrected in another suggestion).

× I think I prefer reading books online or in person or buying the book and read on my own pace.

✓ I think I prefer reading books online or in person or buying the book and reading at my own pace.

The correct preposition to use with 'pace' is 'at', not 'on'. So, it should be 'at my own pace'.

× I find it more easy and comfortable and convenient reading at my home then sitting in the library.

✓ I find it easier, more comfortable, and more convenient reading at my home than sitting in the library.

'Easy' is an adjective and should be in comparative form 'easier' when comparing. Also, 'then' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'than' for comparisons. The adjectives should be parallel and properly modified with 'more' where needed.

× I find it more easy and comfortable and convenient reading at my home then sitting in the library.

✓ I find it easier, more comfortable, and more convenient reading at my home than sitting in the library.

The preposition 'then' is incorrect in comparisons; it should be 'than'.

× I prefer reading books either online or have buying the book and reading at home, which is more comfortable and convenient for me.

✓ I prefer reading books either online or buying the book and reading at home, which is more comfortable and convenient for me.

After 'or', the verb forms should be parallel. 'Have buying' is incorrect; it should be 'buying' to maintain parallelism with 'reading'.

× I've stopped reading the book a long back.

✓ I stopped reading the book a long time ago.

The phrase 'a long back' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a long time ago'. Also, 'I've stopped' (present perfect) is less appropriate with a specific past time reference; simple past 'I stopped' is better.

× When I was a kid I used to go to library in the school house.

✓ When I was a kid I used to go to the library in the school house.

The noun 'library' is countable and singular here, so it requires the definite article 'the'.

× When I was a kid I used to go to library in the school house.

✓ When I was a kid I used to go to the library in the school house.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' because it refers to a specific library known to both speaker and listener.

× We used to have a weekly period for library.

✓ We used to have a weekly period for the library.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'library' because it refers to a specific place known in context.

× We don't usually study books or novels there, we used to just do sudoku instead.

✓ We didn't usually study books or novels there; we used to just do sudoku instead.

The sentence mixes present tense 'don't usually study' with past context 'used to'. It should be consistent in past tense 'didn't usually study'. Also, 'sudoku' is uncountable and fine here.

× We don't usually study books or novels there, we used to just do sudoku instead.

✓ We didn't usually study books or novels there; we used to just do sudoku instead.

The sentence refers to past habits, so the negative should be in past tense 'didn't usually study' instead of present tense 'don't usually study'.

× I'm unsure if Chinese kids visit the library often, but I'm sure that every country has liabilities and everyone might have some practice of going to library so.

✓ I'm unsure if Chinese kids visit the library often, but I'm sure that every country has libraries and everyone might have some practice of going to the library.

'Liabilities' is incorrect; the intended word is 'libraries'. Also, 'going to library' needs the definite article 'the library'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'so', which is unnecessary and removed for clarity.