Library— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "refer to some resources, especially some physical books"; instead, say "use physical books and other resources." Also, try to link your ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I often go to the library to use physical books and other resources. I find it easier to concentrate there because it's quiet, which helps me study more effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and detailed, but there are some minor errors and repetitions ("to to revisit"). Try to use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect your ideas more naturally. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas about concentration twice.

Exemplo: I usually go to the library during final exams to review and practise my tutorial content because it's quiet and close to my classes, which makes studying more convenient.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "most of the books I have was being brought was being bought" is incorrect. Use simpler, clearer sentences and correct verb forms. Also, try to add a linking phrase to explain your answer more smoothly.

Exemplo: Unfortunately, I didn't go to the library as a kid because my small hometown didn't have one. Instead, I bought most of my books from local bookstores.

Sugestão: Your answer is honest but a bit vague and grammatically incorrect. Avoid phrases like "there would probably often visit libraries." Instead, use clearer expressions and add linking words to improve coherence. Also, try to give a more confident opinion or explain why you are unsure.

Exemplo: I'm not sure because I'm not Chinese, but I think many Chinese children often visit libraries since learning is an important part of their culture.

× Yes, I often visit the library to refer to some resources, especially some physical books, as well as studying as I'm able to focus more in a quiet environment.

✓ Yes, I often visit the library to refer to some resources, especially some physical books, as well as to study as I'm able to focus more in a quiet environment.

The phrase 'as well as studying' is incorrect because after 'as well as' a base verb or noun should follow, not a gerund. Using 'to study' maintains parallel structure with 'to refer'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I often visit the library during the final exam period to to revisit and practice on my tutorial content to prepare for my final exam.

✓ I often visit the library during the final exam period to revisit and practice my tutorial content to prepare for my final exam.

The phrase 'practice on my tutorial content' is incorrect; 'practice' is a transitive verb and does not require the preposition 'on'. Also, there is a repeated 'to'. Removing 'on' and the extra 'to' corrects the sentence.

× I often visit the library during the final exam period to to revisit and practice on my tutorial content to prepare for my final exam.

✓ I often visit the library during the final exam period to revisit and practice my tutorial content to prepare for my final exam.

The preposition 'on' after 'practice' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Practice' is used directly with the object without a preposition. Removing 'on' corrects the sentence.

× I find it very easy to concentrate in such a quiet environment and also very convenient as the library is very near to most of the classes that I have to go.

✓ I find it very easy to concentrate in such a quiet environment and also very convenient as the library is very near most of the classes that I have to go to.

The phrase 'near to' is incorrect; 'near' is used without 'to' when indicating proximity. Also, 'classes that I have to go' is incomplete; it should be 'classes that I have to go to' to indicate direction or destination.

× Unfortunately, no. My hometown is quite a small town and there is just not enough resource to build a Public Library, so most of the books I have was being brought was being bought from local bookstores.

✓ Unfortunately, no. My hometown is quite a small town and there are just not enough resources to build a Public Library, so most of the books I have were bought from local bookstores.

'Resource' should be plural 'resources' because it refers to multiple items. Also, 'was being brought was being bought' is incorrect and redundant; the correct past tense is 'were bought'. This corrects subject-verb agreement and tense usage.

× Unfortunately, no. My hometown is quite a small town and there is just not enough resource to build a Public Library, so most of the books I have was being brought was being bought from local bookstores.

✓ Unfortunately, no. My hometown is quite a small town and there are just not enough resources to build a Public Library, so most of the books I have were bought from local bookstores.

The phrase 'was being brought was being bought' is incorrect and redundant. The simple past tense 'were bought' is appropriate here to indicate completed action in the past.

× To be honest, I'm not sure since I'm not a Chinese, but I would say that there would probably often visit libraries since it is part of their culture to learn knowledge.

✓ To be honest, I'm not sure since I'm not Chinese, but I would say that they probably often visit libraries since it is part of their culture to learn knowledge.

The phrase 'I'm not a Chinese' is incorrect; 'Chinese' is used as an adjective or plural noun without 'a'. Also, the subject is missing in 'there would probably often visit libraries'; it should be 'they probably often visit libraries' to clarify who is visiting.