List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons. Avoid unclear endings and grammar mistakes (e.g., "would make you"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the mall because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I listed groceries and toiletries, so I saved time and avoided buying duplicates.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and be slightly more specific. Use a clear topic sentence, then explain how lists help with an example. Replace awkward phrases like "find it work very well" with "find it works well." Use linking words such as "because" and "so" to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list for work because it helps me prioritise tasks. For instance, when I list urgent emails and deadlines each morning, I rarely miss anything and my productivity improves.

Sugestão: Improve clarity and grammar, and give more specific reasons. Start with a clear opinion, then give two concise reasons with linking words. Avoid vague pronouns and incorrect comparative forms (use "harder" correctly).

Exemplo: I think some people avoid lists because they find them complicated and time-consuming. Also, they may prefer flexibility, so they feel a strict list makes their work feel more stressful.

Sugestão: Finish sentences fully and provide a specific example of an app or feature. Use a clear topic sentence then a supporting detail. Avoid incomplete endings like "memorize your."

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it and can sync lists across devices. For example, I use a notes app with reminders, so I get notifications when I need to buy something.

× Yes, I always make a list before I go to a shopping center because it helps me remember the things I need to buy and I believe that a list would make you.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I go to a shopping center because it helps me remember the things I need to buy, and I believe that a list would help you.

The original sentence uses 'would make you' which is incorrect in meaning and collocation; 'make you' requires an object complement (e.g., 'make you remember'). The intended meaning is that a list would help someone, so use 'help' with the bare verb or 'help you' + verb. Also added a comma before 'and' to join independent clauses. Suggestion: use 'would help you' or 'would help' followed by a verb (e.g., 'would help you remember').

× Yes, I always do, at least for my work. And I find it work very well because before doing a list I usually forget the things I have to do.

✓ Yes, I always do, at least for my work. And I find it works very well because before making a list I usually forget the things I have to do.

'Find it work' is ungrammatical; the verb should agree with the singular noun 'it', so use 'find it works' or 'find it very effective'. Also 'doing a list' is unnatural; use 'making a list'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb agreement ('it works') and common collocations ('make a list').

× I guess that some people think that making a list is too complicated and sometimes make your work more harder and it is a waste of time, so they usually do.

✓ I guess that some people think that making a list is too complicated and sometimes makes your work harder, and that it is a waste of time, so they usually don't.

Multiple issues: 'make your work more harder' is incorrect because 'more' and comparative '-er' cannot be used together; use 'harder' or 'more difficult'. Also subject-verb agreement: 'sometimes make' should be 'sometimes makes' if the subject is 'making a list'. The clause 'so they usually do' is unclear—contradicts idea that they dislike lists; changed to 'so they usually don't' to reflect meaning. Suggestions: use 'harder' or 'more difficult', ensure verb agrees with subject, and make the final clause clearly reflect the negative choice ('don't').

× I always do a list on my phone because I usually carry my mobile phone with me everywhere. Besides, phones have many applications that can memorize your.

✓ I always make a list on my phone because I usually carry my mobile phone with me everywhere. Besides, phones have many applications that can store your lists.

'Do a list' is not the correct collocation; use 'make a list'. The phrase 'applications that can memorize your' is incomplete and misuses 'memorize' in this context; 'memorize' is typically for people, not apps. Use 'store your lists' or 'save them' to express that apps keep lists. Suggestion: use correct verb collocations ('make a list') and choose verbs appropriate for technology ('store', 'save').