List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ không cần thiết và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the supermarket on weekends. This helps me remember all the essential items I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything important.

Sugestão: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a schedule every night outlining what I will do the next day. It works well for me because it helps me manage my time effectively and complete all my tasks before the deadlines.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt hiệu quả. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because plans are not always perfect in real life. This can make lists frustrating when things don't go as expected.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "lease" thay vì "list".

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because I always carry my phone with me, so I can check my list anytime instantly.

× I usually make a list of things that I want to buy in a list so that in the weekend I could go to the supermarket and buy them on the lease.

✓ I usually make a list of things that I want to buy so that on the weekend I can go to the supermarket and buy them on the list.

The phrase 'buy them on the lease' is incorrect; it should be 'buy them on the list'. Also, 'in the weekend' should be 'on the weekend' because we use 'on' with days and parts of days. The modal verb 'could' is better replaced with 'can' to express ability in the present/future context.

× Umm, that's why I never be umm by the. An essential products.

✓ Umm, that's why I am never without essential products.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'I never be umm by the. An essential products.' is not a correct structure. The intended meaning seems to be that the speaker is never without essential products. The correction uses 'am never without' to express this properly.

× I usually make a list of things that I want to buy in a list so that in the weekend I could go to the supermarket and buy them on the lease.

✓ I usually make a list of things that I want to buy so that on the weekend I can go to the supermarket and buy them on the list.

The modal verb 'could' is used incorrectly here to express a habitual action or ability. 'Can' is more appropriate to express ability or possibility in the present/future.

× I have a schedule in the night that I what will we, what I would do in every night.

✓ I have a schedule at night that shows what I will do every night.

The original sentence is confusing and contains errors. 'In the night' should be 'at night'. The phrase 'that I what will we, what I would do' is incorrect and unclear. The correction simplifies and clarifies the meaning.

× I think it's really work for me, really essential because it helped me how to blame all my time and do everything that I need to be done in before the deadline.

✓ I think it really works for me, it's really essential because it helps me manage all my time and do everything that I need to get done before the deadline.

'It's really work' should be 'it really works' to agree with the subject. 'Helped me how to blame all my time' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me manage all my time'. Also, 'need to be done in before the deadline' is corrected to 'need to get done before the deadline' for clarity and correctness.

× I think because at least never be perfect because it's where we have an umm have a problem with in the reality.

✓ I think it's because lists are never perfect since we have problems in reality.

'At least never be perfect' is incorrect; it should be 'lists are never perfect'. The phrase 'it's where we have an umm have a problem with in the reality' is unclear and ungrammatical. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects pronoun and article usage.

× So that why, uh, the lease are will become frustrating and so that's why some people don't love it.

✓ That's why the lists can become frustrating, and so some people don't like them.

'The lease are will become' is incorrect; it should be 'the lists can become'. Also, 'don't love it' is better as 'don't like them' to agree with the plural noun 'lists'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on the paper because you know, I bring my phone everywhere and so that when I am want to check my lease I can do it instantly.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I bring my phone everywhere, so when I want to check my list, I can do it instantly.

'On the paper' should be 'on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here. 'When I am want to check' is incorrect; it should be 'when I want to check'. 'Lease' is a mispronunciation or typo for 'list'.