List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and how you do it. Avoid redundancy and long sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and remember everything I need. I prefer to use my mobile phone to make the list since it is portable and easy to edit. This way, I can take my list anywhere and avoid forgetting items.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting small errors and making the structure clearer. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily and try to be more specific about how the list helps your productivity.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me manage my time effectively and increase productivity. I use my mobile phone to create the list and set reminders, so I never miss deadlines and stay focused throughout the day.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but the sentences are unclear and contain grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more naturally and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to explain reasons clearly. Also, use correct vocabulary such as 'diligence' instead of 'diligent'.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and repetitive. Also, it requires a lot of self-discipline to keep making lists regularly, which can be difficult for many.

Sugestão: Your answer is mostly clear but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct plural forms and articles, and connect your ideas smoothly with linking words like 'because' and 'also'. Avoid redundancy and be concise.

Exemplo: Although paper lists are affordable, I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I can easily edit and prioritize tasks. Also, I can set reminders and notifications for important tasks, and I don't have to carry extra paper and pen, which is very convenient.

× As I usually make at least 20 but I tend to go for the shopping because it helps me to remain convenient as well as manage all my tasks or the list of things that I need to buy.

✓ As I usually make at least 20 items, I tend to go shopping because it helps me to stay organized as well as manage all my tasks or the list of things that I need to buy.

The phrase 'make at least 20' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify what is being made, such as '20 items'. Also, 'go for the shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. The word 'convenient' is incorrectly used; 'stay organized' or 'stay convenient' is better replaced with 'stay organized' to convey the intended meaning.

× So it is very useful and I make them in the mobile which makes much more easier because mobiles are portable and it is convenient for me to take my list everywhere I go.

✓ So it is very useful and I make them on my mobile, which makes it much easier because mobiles are portable and it is convenient for me to take my list everywhere I go.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to using a mobile device; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'much more easier' is incorrect; it should be 'much easier'. The sentence also needs 'it' before 'much easier' for clarity.

× I think making least for the work helps me manage my time properly as well as helps me increase my productivity.

✓ I think making lists for work helps me manage my time properly as well as increase my productivity.

The word 'least' is a typo or incorrect; it should be 'lists' (plural) to match the context. Also, 'for the work' is better as 'for work' for natural phrasing.

× It usually works because I make my list on mobile phones and set the reminders as well as notifications to meet the deadline so that I remain productive throughout the day.

✓ It usually works because I make my list on my mobile phone and set reminders as well as notifications to meet deadlines so that I remain productive throughout the day.

The phrase 'on mobile phones' is too general; 'on my mobile phone' is more natural. Also, 'the reminders' and 'the deadline' should be 'reminders' and 'deadlines' to generalize the statement.

× I think making list require a lot of diligent as well as a way to perceive in a natural way and to do the things on a regular basis.

✓ I think making lists requires a lot of diligence as well as a way to persevere naturally and to do things on a regular basis.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' (plural). 'Require' should be 'requires' to agree with singular subject 'making lists' treated as singular activity. 'Diligent' is an adjective; the noun 'diligence' is correct here. 'Perceive' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'persevere'. 'In a natural way' is better as 'naturally'. 'Do the things' is better as 'do things'.

× So I think many people perceive it as a very hard.

✓ So I think many people perceive it as very hard.

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the adjective 'hard'. 'Hard' here is an adjective and does not need an article. The phrase should be 'very hard' without 'a'.

× Although paper are quite affordable but I think making this on the mobile phone is more convenient because I can edit and prioritize my tax accordingly.

✓ Although paper is quite affordable, I think making lists on the mobile phone is more convenient because I can edit and prioritize my tasks accordingly.

'Paper' is uncountable and should be treated as singular, so 'paper are' is incorrect; it should be 'paper is'. 'Making this' is unclear; 'making lists' fits the context. 'Tax' is a typo for 'tasks'. The conjunction 'but' is redundant after 'although' and should be removed.

× And similarly I can also make a reminders as well as notification for my important tasks.

✓ Similarly, I can also set reminders as well as notifications for my important tasks.

'Make a reminders' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'set reminders'. Also, 'notification' should be plural 'notifications' to match 'reminders'. The sentence also benefits from removing 'And' at the start and adding a comma after 'Similarly'.

× And I have no any overhead of carrying extra paper and pen with me whenever I go which is very comfortable with mobile phones.

✓ And I have no overhead of carrying extra paper and pen with me whenever I go, which is very convenient with mobile phones.

'No any' is incorrect; it should be either 'no' or 'any', not both. 'Comfortable' is incorrect in this context; 'convenient' is the appropriate adjective. A comma is needed before 'which' to separate the clauses.