List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. For example, explain why making a list helps you shop more efficiently.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because sometimes I forget what to buy. Also, my wife often reminds me to include certain items. So, making a list helps me shop more easily and avoid missing anything.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and clarity by using linking words and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain how making lists helps your work with specific details.

Exemplo: Yes, I work in a construction company, and for each project, I make a schedule and a detailed list of materials needed. This helps me prioritize urgent items and manage the project efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to directly answer the question with a clear opinion and supporting reasons. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. However, making lists can help avoid forgetting important items, especially when they have many tasks to do.

Sugestão: Make your answer more coherent and grammatically correct. Start with a clear preference, then explain reasons using linking words. Avoid vague or confusing sentences.

Exemplo: Nowadays, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me. Unlike paper lists, which can be lost, digital lists are easy to access and update anytime.

× Yes, when I go for shopping definitely I make the list because sometime I forget which one things I have to buy and which one.

✓ Yes, when I go shopping, I definitely make a list because sometimes I forget which things I have to buy and which ones I don't.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Which one things' is incorrect; it should be 'which things' or 'which ones'. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list' as it is not a specific list previously mentioned.

× My wife told me to bring this one.

✓ My wife told me to bring this.

The phrase 'this one' is unnecessary here; 'this' is sufficient to refer to the item. Using 'this one' can be redundant or unclear in this context.

× So it's the easy to shop when I make the list.

✓ So it's easy to shop when I make a list.

The phrase 'the easy' is incorrect; 'easy' is an adjective and does not need 'the' before it. Also, 'the list' should be 'a list' as it is not a specific list previously mentioned.

× Yes, I'm working in construction company so when I start my work for specific project so I make the schedule and proper list to buy and timelines which one we need urgent as part of the required material.

✓ Yes, I work in a construction company, so when I start work on a specific project, I make a schedule and a proper list of items to buy and timelines for the materials we urgently need.

The phrase 'working in construction company' needs an article: 'a construction company'. 'Start my work for specific project' should be 'start work on a specific project'. 'Make the schedule and proper list to buy and timelines which one we need urgent' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it should be 'make a schedule and a proper list of items to buy and timelines for the materials we urgently need.'

× Yes, mostly people make the list because of the missing some material because sometimes they go outside and they work they have multi works or sometimes they miss the some material so they for easy they make the list to bring everything.

✓ Yes, mostly people make lists because they might miss some materials. Sometimes they go out and have multiple tasks, so to make things easier, they make lists to bring everything.

'Make the list' should be 'make lists' as it refers to lists in general. 'Missing some material' should be 'miss some materials' to match plural usage. 'Multi works' is incorrect; 'multiple tasks' or 'many tasks' is better. 'They for easy they make the list' is unclear; it should be 'to make things easier, they make lists.'

× Today, nowadays the technology time so very easy to make list in mobile phone so every time in your pocket.

✓ Nowadays, with technology, it is very easy to make lists on a mobile phone because it is always in your pocket.

'Today, nowadays the technology time' is awkward; 'Nowadays, with technology' is better. 'Make list in mobile phone' should be 'make lists on a mobile phone' because we use 'on' for devices. 'Every time in your pocket' is unclear; 'it is always in your pocket' is correct.

× So if you make a paperless so sometime you lost.

✓ So if you go paperless, sometimes you lose it.

'Make a paperless' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go paperless'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'You lost' should be 'you lose it' to indicate losing the list or note.

× So how you will find it so easy to make an iPhone?

✓ So how will you find it? It's easier to make a list on an iPhone.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. It seems to ask how to find the list if lost and suggests making a list on an iPhone is easier. The corrected sentences clarify the meaning and correct the structure.