List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying "I'm very organised person," say "I'm a very organized person." Also, avoid repeating similar ideas like "it helps me to write the things I need" and "it is easier and more sufficient for me." Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I'm a very organized person. It helps me remember exactly what I need, so I don't forget anything or buy unnecessary items.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases, such as "Ionem" and "make lease." Try to proofread your answer and use correct vocabulary. Also, use linking words to improve coherence. For example, use "because" or "so" to connect ideas. Avoid repeating the same idea about being organized multiple times.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make lists for my work because I am a very organized person. This helps me prioritize tasks and complete them before the deadlines, which saves me time and reduces stress.

Sugestão: Your answer has some repetition and incomplete ideas, especially at the end. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and avoid repeating words like "it it." Use linking words such as "because" and "for example" appropriately. Also, provide more specific reasons why some people dislike making lists.

Exemplo: Some people prefer to be spontaneous and do things whenever they feel like it, so they don't like making lists. For example, some might find lists stressful because they feel pressured to follow them strictly.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains a contradiction: you say "I can't change the list anytime," which likely means you can change it anytime. Also, the sentence structure is a bit awkward. Try to clarify your ideas and use linking words to connect points smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more accessible and convenient. I can easily add or remove items anytime, and it's easier to carry my phone than paper wherever I go.