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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Absolutely, because my home is far from the market. So if I went to the market to buy something, I need to remember in my on my phone because if I forget it, forget something, I cannot come back.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Well, I guess not because I think the work list will be not a good finished, so I do not do it.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Well, I think my list will help them have a clear mind to know what they should do.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I think maybe on the phone will be more convenient because I we spend most of the time with our phones.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确,存在重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并注意时态和冠词的使用。

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list on my phone because my home is far from the market. This helps me remember everything I need and avoid making extra trips.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 回答不够清晰,表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题,并用简单明了的句子说明原因。

Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I find it hard to finish all the tasks on the list.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 回答没有直接回应问题,且逻辑不清。建议直接说明原因,并用连接词丰富内容。

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful or prefer to remember things naturally.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和多余词汇,建议简洁表达并注意主谓一致。

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I always have my phone with me.

Gramática

Past tense issue

× So if I went to the market to buy something, I need to remember in my on my phone because if I forget it, forget something, I cannot come back.

So if I go to the market to buy something, I need to remember it on my phone because if I forget something, I cannot come back.

这里的条件句使用了过去式"went",但主句用的是现在时"need",时态不一致。应使用一般现在时"go",因为这是一个习惯性动作。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I need to remember in my on my phone because if I forget it, forget something, I cannot come back.

I need to remember it on my phone because if I forget something, I cannot come back.

短语中"remember in my on my phone"使用了错误的介词和多余的词,应改为"remember it on my phone",表示在手机上记下。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Well, I guess not because I think the work list will be not a good finished, so I do not do it.

Well, I guess not because I think the work list will not be finished well, so I do not do it.

"will be not a good finished"结构不正确,"finished"是形容词时不需要冠词"a",且"good"应放在副词位置,改为"finished well"更合适。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think maybe on the phone will be more convenient because I we spend most of the time with our phones.

I think maybe on the phone will be more convenient because we spend most of the time with our phones.

句中出现了多余的主语"I we",应删除"I",保持主语一致为"we"。

Vocabulário

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
ClearUnderstandable; Obvious; Transparent; Bright; Unobstructed
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
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