Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Absolutely, because my home is far from the market. So if I went to the market to buy something, I need to remember in my on my phone because if I forget it, forget something, I cannot come back.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Well, I guess not because I think the work list will be not a good finished, so I do not do it.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Well, I think my list will help them have a clear mind to know what they should do.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I think maybe on the phone will be more convenient because I we spend most of the time with our phones.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确,存在重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并注意时态和冠词的使用。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list on my phone because my home is far from the market. This helps me remember everything I need and avoid making extra trips.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答不够清晰,表达含糊且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题,并用简单明了的句子说明原因。
Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I find it hard to finish all the tasks on the list.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答没有直接回应问题,且逻辑不清。建议直接说明原因,并用连接词丰富内容。
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful or prefer to remember things naturally.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和多余词汇,建议简洁表达并注意主谓一致。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I always have my phone with me.
× So if I went to the market to buy something, I need to remember in my on my phone because if I forget it, forget something, I cannot come back.
✓ So if I go to the market to buy something, I need to remember it on my phone because if I forget something, I cannot come back.
这里的条件句使用了过去式"went",但主句用的是现在时"need",时态不一致。应使用一般现在时"go",因为这是一个习惯性动作。
× I need to remember in my on my phone because if I forget it, forget something, I cannot come back.
✓ I need to remember it on my phone because if I forget something, I cannot come back.
短语中"remember in my on my phone"使用了错误的介词和多余的词,应改为"remember it on my phone",表示在手机上记下。
× Well, I guess not because I think the work list will be not a good finished, so I do not do it.
✓ Well, I guess not because I think the work list will not be finished well, so I do not do it.
"will be not a good finished"结构不正确,"finished"是形容词时不需要冠词"a",且"good"应放在副词位置,改为"finished well"更合适。
× I think maybe on the phone will be more convenient because I we spend most of the time with our phones.
✓ I think maybe on the phone will be more convenient because we spend most of the time with our phones.
句中出现了多余的主语"I we",应删除"I",保持主语一致为"we"。