ListPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Yes I do. Usually before I go to the supermarket I complete the list about the things I need to buy. I found I find it clear and convenient so that I won't waste time wondering whether I need it or not. So.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Yes, I do. Making a list for my work help me keep organized and it usually works, especially when several tasks are going on at the same time. Making a list can help me prioritize the most important ones so that I don't miss anything.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Perhaps it's because they find the list somehow useless because the plan doesn't always fit. The real situation in making a list of undone work might make them stressed even more and hence bring down the efficiency.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I prefer to make a list on my phone because when my plan changes, I can always have access to the list and make a switch. Also, it is more convenient because I can view it whenever and wherever I am. Lastly, I will never lose it.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.5Fluência e coerência: 7.0Pronúncia: 6.5Gramática: 6.5Recurso lexical: 6.5

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点,但有些语法错误和重复(如“I found I find”),且结尾“so”显得不完整。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并用连词使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the supermarket because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting items.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 85.0

Sugestão: 回答内容较完整,但“help”应为“helps”,且可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。建议注意主谓一致,并适当使用连接词。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Making a list helps me stay organized, especially when I have multiple tasks. It also allows me to prioritize important tasks so that I don't miss anything.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 80.0

Sugestão: 表达了原因,但句子结构稍显复杂且不够自然。建议简化句子,使用更自然的表达方式,并增加连接词。

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because plans can change, making the list seem useless. Also, seeing unfinished tasks might stress them out and reduce their efficiency.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 90.0

Sugestão: 回答清晰且内容丰富,但“make a switch”表达不够地道,建议用更自然的短语如“update it”。

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can easily update them when my plans change. It's also convenient since I can check the list anytime and anywhere, and I won't lose it.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× Making a list for my work help me keep organized and it usually works, especially when several tasks are going on at the same time.

Making a list for my work helps me keep organized and it usually works, especially when several tasks are going on at the same time.

主语是单数名词短语“Making a list”,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”,否则主谓不一致。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Usually before I go to the supermarket I complete the list about the things I need to buy.

Usually before I go to the supermarket I complete the list of the things I need to buy.

短语“the list about the things”中,介词“about”用法不当,正确表达应为“the list of the things”,表示“关于……的清单”应使用“of”。

Vocabulário

ClearUnderstandable; Obvious; Transparent; Bright; Unobstructed
FitSuitable; Healthy; Equip; Join; Match
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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