List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý chính rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "Umm" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ (ví dụ: "re to memorize" không đúng). Bạn cũng nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember all the items I need. This way, I can keep track of everything and avoid forgetting anything important.

Sugestão: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp hơn và tránh dùng từ không chính thức như "freestyle". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng thêm bằng cách sử dụng từ nối để làm rõ lý do và kết quả, giúp câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Actually, I find making lists for work quite time-consuming because I prefer to handle tasks spontaneously. Therefore, I usually complete one task first before moving on to the next.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính rõ ràng nhưng nên sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên dùng từ ngữ chính xác hơn như "spend much time preparing" thay vì "spend much time to prepare" và tránh lặp từ.

Exemplo: I believe some people dislike making lists because they don't want to spend much time preparing, and they may be uncertain about completing all tasks. Therefore, they prefer to focus on one task at a time.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời của bạn rõ ràng và có lý do cụ thể, tuy nhiên bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "make notes, make a list" và sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ chính xác hơn như "on my mobile phone" thay vì "on my mobile phones".

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because it's easier to carry around, more convenient, and less likely to be lost compared to paper lists.

× I found it quite demanding when we need to re to memorize all the categories we need to buy

✓ I found it quite demanding when we need to memorize all the categories we need to buy

The phrase 're to memorize' contains an unnecessary and incorrect repetition of 're'. The correct form is simply 'to memorize'. This is a typographical error affecting the verb form.

× Well unfortunately I found it quite time consuming when making lists for what I'm going to do because I'm just kind of a person who freestyle everything.

✓ Well unfortunately I found it quite time consuming when making lists for what I'm going to do because I'm just kind of a person who freestyles everything.

The verb 'freestyle' needs to agree with the singular subject 'a person' in the present tense, so it should be 'freestyles'. This is a third person singular issue related to verb conjugation.

× I will finish what needs to be done 1st and then move on to the other task.

✓ I will finish what needs to be done first and then move on to the other tasks.

The phrase 'the other task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple tasks following the first one. Also, '1st' should be written as 'first' in formal writing.

× Well, I think most people just simply don't want to spend much time to prepare for what they're going to do, and also they're not sure whether they will finish it or not.

✓ Well, I think most people just simply don't want to spend much time preparing for what they're going to do, and also they're not sure whether they will finish it or not.

The verb 'spend' is followed by a gerund, so 'to prepare' should be changed to 'preparing'. This is a common prepositional verb pattern error.

× So it would be better to finish task by task.

✓ So it would be better to finish tasks one by one.

The phrase 'task by task' is awkward and missing plural form. Using 'tasks one by one' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Well, personally I would love to make notes, make a list on my mobile phones as it is better to carry around, it's more convenient and it will be easier to keep track of it rather than losing it when you write it down on a paper.

✓ Well, personally I would love to make notes, make a list on my mobile phone as it is better to carry around, it's more convenient and it will be easier to keep track of it rather than losing it when you write it down on paper.

The word 'phones' should be singular 'phone' because a person usually carries one mobile phone. Also, 'a paper' should be 'paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here.