List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure subject-verb agreement. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear reason for making a list.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it saves me time. Instead of wandering around, I go directly to the places where I need to buy specific items, which makes shopping more efficient.

Sugestão: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly. Avoid repetition and explain how making a list reduces stress with specific details.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a work list because I sometimes forget my tasks and their deadlines. By creating a timetable, I can organize my activities effectively, which helps reduce my stress levels.

Sugestão: Avoid filler words and improve grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clearer reasons. Be specific about why some people prefer not to make lists.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they have excellent memories and can remember their tasks easily. They are well-organized and confident in managing their time without written reminders.

Sugestão: Eliminate filler words and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to explain advantages clearly. Make sure your answer is complete and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because technology makes it very convenient. I can update my tasks anytime and anywhere, so I don't need to carry paper lists with me.

× Yes, there are many people who don't like to making the list.

✓ Yes, there are many people who don't like making the list.

The verb 'like' is followed by the gerund form without 'to'. Using 'to making' is incorrect; it should be 'like making'. This is a common error with verb + -ing form usage.

× I always like to make a list whenever I visit to the shopping because it save my time as uh I no need to visit this uh here to there and there to here.

✓ I always like to make a list whenever I go shopping because it saves my time as I don't need to visit here and there.

The phrase 'visit to the shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping'. Also, 'visit this uh here to there and there to here' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'visit here and there'. Additionally, 'it save' should be 'it saves' to agree with the singular subject.

× because it save my time as uh I no need to visit this uh here to there and there to here.

✓ because it saves my time as I don't need to visit here and there.

The verb 'save' must agree with the singular subject 'it', so it should be 'saves'. Also, 'I no need' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't need'.

× I just go on the particular place where I have to buy any particular thing, so it's my save time.

✓ I just go to the particular place where I have to buy any particular thing, so it saves my time.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'to' when indicating movement towards a place. Also, 'it's my save time' is incorrect; it should be 'it saves my time'.

× So I always try to make a timetable which activity I have to perform on which time.

✓ So I always try to make a timetable of which activity I have to perform at which time.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used here; 'of which' is more appropriate to indicate possession. Also, the preposition 'on' should be 'at' when referring to time.

× It is very convenient and not too much stress level increase with this.

✓ It is very convenient and does not increase my stress level too much.

The phrase 'not too much stress level increase with this' is awkward and incorrect. The correct structure is 'does not increase my stress level too much'.

× Yes, there are many people who don't like to making the list.

✓ Yes, there are many people who don't like making the list.

After 'don't like', the verb should be in the gerund form without 'to'. 'Don't like to making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't like making'.

× Oh, I think the most reason is that they have a very sharp memory and the they don't forget to what activities they have to perform on what time.

✓ Oh, I think the main reason is that they have a very sharp memory and they don't forget which activities they have to perform at what time.

The phrase 'the most reason' is incorrect; it should be 'the main reason'. Also, 'to what activities' is incorrect; 'which activities' is correct. The preposition 'on' should be 'at' when referring to time.

× They are very organized person and they will have a very sharp mind.

✓ They are very organized people and they have very sharp minds.

'Person' should be plural 'people' to agree with 'they'. Also, 'will have' is incorrect here; present tense 'have' is appropriate. 'A very sharp mind' should be plural 'very sharp minds' to agree with plural subject.

× I always try to make the list on my mobile phone because, uh, due to the advancement of the technology, it is a very convenient for me to make a list on the phone.

✓ I always try to make the list on my mobile phone because, due to the advancement of technology, it is very convenient for me to make a list on the phone.

The phrase 'the advancement of the technology' is incorrect; 'advancement of technology' is correct without 'the'. Also, 'a very convenient' should be 'very convenient' as 'convenient' is an adjective and does not need an article here.

× And I can also update that task on my mobile phone anywhere, anytime.

✓ And I can also update tasks on my mobile phone anywhere, anytime.

'That task' is too specific; 'tasks' is more appropriate in this context to indicate multiple items. Also, 'update that task' is less natural than 'update tasks'.

× So I think there is a no need to carry any paper and there is no any to.

✓ So I think there is no need to carry any paper and there is no need to carry anything else.

The phrase 'there is a no need' is incorrect; it should be 'there is no need'. Also, 'there is no any to' is incomplete and incorrect; it should be 'there is no need to carry anything else' or similar.