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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Yes, because I think it's very convenient, it can organize what I need to buy and I I can't forgot something to buy.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Yes, I think it can organize my day and help me to ensure I don't forget anything important. And it does work because I can see the list and do something.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Well I don't know but I think they have the good memories to make sure they can't forget anything important and some people think megalith is needed a lot of time and say doesn't based on the list to do something.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

Well, I think on my phone because it's very convenient and to make sure I can see it, for example, like I make a list on the paper, maybe they were lost and we use phones every day, every time. It's very conveniently.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达,如“I I can't forgot something to buy”。建议注意时态和拼写,避免重复。可以简洁明了地表达观点,并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me organize what I need to buy and ensures I don't forget anything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 回答较为简单,表达有些重复,如“help me to ensure I don't forget anything important”和“it does work because I can see the list and do something”。建议使用连接词丰富句子结构,并具体说明如何帮助工作。

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and ensures I don't forget important duties. This method works well since I can check off completed items, which keeps me focused.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“megalith is needed a lot of time”和“say doesn't based on the list”。建议加强语法基础,避免使用错误词汇,表达观点时要清晰具体。

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and believe it saves time. They may also feel that following a list limits their flexibility.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅,如“maybe they were lost”和“It's very conveniently”。建议注意语法和词性使用,句子应简洁且逻辑清晰。

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can always access it. Unlike paper lists, which can be lost, my phone is always with me.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× I I can't forgot something to buy.

I can't forget something to buy.

这里的错误是动词形式错误,'forgot'是过去式,句中应使用动词原形'forget',因为前面有情态动词'can't',情态动词后应接动词原形。

Past tense issue

× I I can't forgot something to buy.

I can't forget something to buy.

同上,'forgot'是过去式,情态动词后应接动词原形,故应改为'forget'。

Singular and plural issue

× I think it can organize my day and help me to ensure I don't forget anything important.

I think it can organize my day and help me ensure I don't forget anything important.

'help me to ensure'中,'help'后面接动词时,'to'可以省略,使用不当会影响表达的流畅性。

Singular and plural issue

× And it does work because I can see the list and do something.

And it does work because I can see the list and do things.

'do something'在此处表达泛指,应该用复数形式'things',表示做多件事。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× some people think megalith is needed a lot of time and say doesn't based on the list to do something.

some people think making a list needs a lot of time and say they don't base their actions on the list.

原句中'megalith'应为'making a list',且句子结构混乱,缺少主语,代词使用错误,需调整为正确的代词和句子结构。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Well, I think on my phone because it's very convenient and to make sure I can see it, for example, like I make a list on the paper, maybe they were lost and we use phones every day, every time.

Well, I think on my phone because it's very convenient and I can make sure I can see it. For example, if I make a list on paper, it might get lost, and we use phones every day, all the time.

原句中'like I make a list on the paper'表达不清,'on the paper'应为'on paper',且句子连接不当,需分句并调整介词和表达方式。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It's very conveniently.

It's very convenient.

'conveniently'是副词,修饰动词,'convenient'是形容词,修饰名词或作表语,此处应使用形容词'convenient'。

Vocabulário

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
LostMissing; Off course; Missed; Bygone; Extinct
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