List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and clear but can be improved by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep sentences concise. For example, instead of repeating 'shopping' and 'list' multiple times, you can combine ideas and use correct prepositions.

Exemplo: Yes, I always prepare a shopping list on my phone to avoid forgetting items, as I often do. Making this list has become an essential part of my daily routine.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but is somewhat repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to combine sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' effectively. Also, avoid repeating the same words unnecessarily and provide a clearer explanation.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list of my daily tasks because I tend to forget important things, so it helps me stay organized and focused.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors that affect understanding. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words to explain reasons. Avoid confusing phrases and be specific about why some people dislike making lists.

Exemplo: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. Instead, they prefer to remember tasks mentally and complete them directly.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use linking words like 'however' and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, try to make your sentences more concise and clear.

Exemplo: I think both paper and phone are good options; however, I prefer using my phone because it is portable and I never lose it, unlike paper lists.

× I always prepare a shopping list before I'm going to the shopping and to do the grocery.

✓ I always prepare a shopping list before I go shopping and do the grocery.

The phrase 'before I'm going to the shopping' is incorrect because 'going to the shopping' is not a proper expression. The correct form is 'go shopping' without 'the'. Also, 'to do the grocery' should be 'do the grocery' or better 'do the grocery shopping'. The prepositions and article usage here are incorrect.

× I also make a list in my notepad in my mobile phone for to avoid forgetting the items because I usually forget the items what I shop in the shopping store.

✓ I also make a list in the notepad on my mobile phone to avoid forgetting the items because I usually forget the items I buy in the store.

The prepositions 'in my notepad in my mobile phone' should be 'in the notepad on my mobile phone' because we say 'on the phone' for apps or notes. Also, 'for to avoid' is incorrect; it should be 'to avoid'. 'What I shop in the shopping store' is incorrect; it should be 'I buy in the store'.

× So making a list has become a very essential part of my daily routine.

✓ So making a list has become a very essential part of my daily routine.

This sentence is correct and does not have a singular/plural issue.

× Yes, I usually make a list of my work and list of things that I do in the daytime because I always forget the important things.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list of my work and a list of things that I do during the day because I always forget important things.

The phrase 'list of my work and list of things' needs an article before the second 'list'. Also, 'in the daytime' is better expressed as 'during the day'. 'The important things' can be 'important things' as a general statement.

× So it is very crucial and very, very important to me to make the list of the things.

✓ So it is very crucial and very important to me to make the list of things.

The phrase 'very, very important' is acceptable but can be simplified. Also, 'the list of the things' is better as 'the list of things' because 'things' is general here.

× According to me, listing down the things is very important, but some people believe that when we list down the things to remember them, they think it is the best days of time.

✓ In my opinion, listing down things is very important, but some people believe that when we list things to remember them, they think it is a waste of time.

'According to me' is not idiomatic; 'In my opinion' is better. 'Listing down the things' should be 'listing down things' or just 'listing things'. 'It is the best days of time' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'a waste of time'.

× Instead of listing down and writing down the things, they do the things in person.

✓ Instead of listing and writing down things, they do the things themselves.

'Listing down' is redundant; 'listing' suffices. 'Do the things in person' is awkward; 'do the things themselves' or 'do them personally' is better.

× Well I believe both options are good but if you want to decide in both two options.

✓ Well, I believe both options are good, but if you want to decide between the two options,

The phrase 'if you want to decide in both two options' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'decide between the two options'. Also, commas are needed after 'Well' and before 'but'.

× So I decide phone because it is portable.

✓ So I choose the phone because it is portable.

'Decide phone' is incorrect; the verb 'choose' fits better here. Also, 'the phone' is needed as a definite article.

× Paper is also portable but sometimes I didn't remember where I put the paper in which I do the To Do List.

✓ Paper is also portable, but sometimes I don't remember where I put the paper on which I write the To Do List.

'Didn't remember' should be 'don't remember' to match present tense context. 'In which I do the To Do List' is incorrect; it should be 'on which I write the To Do List' because we write on paper.

× So phone is very convenient and easy to carry.

✓ So the phone is very convenient and easy to carry.

The noun 'phone' needs the definite article 'the' here. The rest of the sentence is correct.