List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하지만, 문법적 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'to mall' 대신 'to the mall'이 되어야 하며, 좀 더 구체적인 이유나 경험을 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go to the mall because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

Sugestão: 문법과 표현이 다소 부자연스럽고 어색합니다. 'When I finish my days' 대신 'At the end of each day'와 같은 표현을 사용하고, 문장을 더 명확하게 구성하는 것이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a to-do list for the next day at the end of each day. It works well because I know exactly what tasks I need to complete when I start my work.

Sugestão: 'Suppressions'라는 단어 사용이 부적절하며, 의미 전달이 명확하지 않습니다. 'Stress'나 'pressure' 같은 단어를 사용하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 것이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because it can make them feel stressed or overwhelmed by seeing many tasks they have to do.

Sugestão: 전반적으로 이해는 되지만, 문법과 어휘 사용이 다소 어색합니다. 'an application called Notion'과 같은 표현을 사용하고, 이유를 좀 더 구체적으로 설명하면 좋습니다.

Exemplo: Actually, I prefer to make my lists using an application called Notion because it allows me to organize my tasks easily and access them anywhere.

× Before I go to mall I make a list.

✓ Before I go to the mall I make a list.

The noun 'mall' is a singular, countable noun and requires a definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'mall' is incorrect in this context.

× When I finish my days I make A to do list of tomorrow.

✓ When I finish my day I make a to-do list for tomorrow.

The phrase 'my days' is incorrect here; it should be singular 'my day' to refer to the current day. Also, 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. The preposition 'of' is incorrect; 'for' is appropriate to indicate the list is for tomorrow.

× It works very well because I can know my To Do List when start of the day.

✓ It works very well because I can check my to-do list at the start of the day.

The phrase 'I can know my To Do List' is unnatural; 'know' is not used with lists. 'Check' or 'see' is more appropriate. Also, 'when start of the day' is incorrect; it should be 'at the start of the day' to indicate time.

× I think the list can give people a suppressions if there is any to do tasks.

✓ I think the list can give people suppression if there are any to-do tasks.

The word 'suppressions' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'suppression' (uncountable). Also, 'if there is any to do tasks' is incorrect; it should be 'if there are any to-do tasks' to agree in number and use the correct form of 'to-do'.

× It can give suppressions to many papers.

✓ It can cause suppression of many papers.

Again, 'suppressions' is incorrect; 'suppression' is uncountable. The phrase 'give suppressions to many papers' is awkward; 'cause suppression of many papers' is clearer and more natural.

× Actually I prefer to make a list on application named notion.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on an application named Notion.

The noun 'application' is singular and countable, so it requires an indefinite article 'an'. Also, 'Notion' is a proper noun and should be capitalized.

× It can make A to do list very easily.

✓ It can make a to-do list very easily.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. Also, 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'.