List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then giving a reason. Use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously based on what I need at the moment.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat confusing and lacks clarity. Use a clear topic sentence and explain how making a list helps you. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Try to give a simple and clear reason why some people avoid making lists, using relevant vocabulary and linking words.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and enjoy living without strict plans.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear preference statement and explain why, using linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's convenient and saves time compared to writing on paper.

× Perhaps not 'cause I don't think so that I need to list.

✓ Perhaps not because I don't think I need to make a list.

The original sentence uses 'so that' incorrectly and omits the verb 'make' before 'a list'. The phrase 'I don't think so that I need to list' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'I don't think I need to make a list' to express the intended meaning clearly.

× I just going on a shopping mall, then I just buy whatever I need, that's it.

✓ I just go to a shopping mall, then I just buy whatever I need, that's it.

The phrase 'I just going' is incorrect because the verb 'go' should be in the base form 'go' after 'I just'. Also, 'on a shopping mall' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'to a shopping mall'. The corrected sentence uses the simple present tense 'go' and the correct preposition 'to'.

× I just going on a shopping mall, then I just buy whatever I need, that's it.

✓ I just go to a shopping mall, then I just buy whatever I need, that's it.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'shopping mall'. The correct preposition is 'to' when indicating movement towards a place. So, 'go to a shopping mall' is correct.

× Yes, usually when I have time, then I have to write something that I need to work that.

✓ Yes, usually when I have time, I write down something I need to work on.

The phrase 'write something that I need to work that' is ungrammatical and confusing. The pronoun 'that' is misused. The correct expression is 'write down something I need to work on' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× That gave me much more than doing nothing.

✓ That helps me much more than doing nothing.

The original sentence uses past tense 'gave' which is inconsistent with the present context. Also, the sentence structure is awkward. Using 'helps me' in present tense fits better and clarifies the meaning.

× So it's a work.

✓ So it's work.

The article 'a' before 'work' is unnecessary because 'work' is an uncountable noun in this context. The correct phrase is 'it's work'.

× 'Cause they're something special they have, they have meaning of life, they just doing their real life Desert want to grow themselves and that's why they do.

✓ 'Cause they have something special, they have meaning in life, they are just living their real life, desire to grow themselves, and that's why they do.

The original sentence has multiple pronoun and verb form errors. 'They're something special they have' is incorrect; it should be 'they have something special'. 'They just doing' lacks the auxiliary verb 'are'. 'Desert' is a misspelling of 'desire'. The corrected sentence fixes pronoun usage, verb forms, and spelling to improve clarity.

× I prefer to. Having a phone is so helpful 'cause in my hand I've always seen my phone.

✓ I prefer to. Having a phone is so helpful because I always have my phone in my hand.

The phrase 'in my hand I've always seen my phone' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'I always have my phone in my hand' to indicate possession and habitual action.

× I don't have to write, don't waste time.

✓ I don't have to write, so I don't waste time.

The original sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the two clauses properly. Adding 'so' clarifies the cause-effect relationship between not writing and not wasting time.