Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
No, because I'm a very casual girl. Like I don't like to make a list. I just go out and go to the mall or go to the shop and buy whatever I want at that time.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, of course, because I think it is very vital to make a list that because the list can inflect the things you need to do and you can follow the list and do it.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Maybe they just very, they're just very casual and they think their brains can handle all the tasks, so they think that it's not vital to make a list.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Of course on my phone because I think the most important thing is that if I make the the list on my phone, it can helps me to save my time and most of the time there is no pain on my hand.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答时语言较为口语化且有重复,缺少连贯的逻辑连接词,内容较简单。建议使用更自然且连贯的表达,避免重复,并适当丰富细节。
Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to shop casually. I just go to the mall and buy whatever catches my eye at the moment, which makes shopping more enjoyable for me.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当(如'inflect'),表达不够清晰。建议使用准确词汇,简洁表达观点,并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks clearly. By following the list, I can complete my work efficiently and avoid forgetting important duties.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答表达有些重复且不够流畅,缺少连接词。建议用更自然的表达方式,避免重复,并用连接词增强逻辑性。
Exemplo: Some people might dislike making lists because they are quite relaxed and believe their memory is sufficient to manage all their tasks, so they don't see lists as necessary.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇,表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的表达。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it saves time and is more convenient. Also, it prevents my hand from getting tired compared to writing on paper.
× Maybe they just very, they're just very casual and they think their brains can handle all the tasks, so they think that it's not vital to make a list.
✓ Maybe they are just very casual and they think their brains can handle all the tasks, so they think that it's not vital to make a list.
句中缺少动词,'Maybe they just very'结构不完整,应补充动词be动词,改为'Maybe they are just very casual'。这是动词+ing形式问题,需注意句子完整性。
× Of course on my phone because I think the most important thing is that if I make the the list on my phone, it can helps me to save my time and most of the time there is no pain on my hand.
✓ Of course on my phone because I think the most important thing is that if I make the list on my phone, it can help me to save my time and most of the time there is no pain in my hand.
动词help后不加s,因为主语是can,情态动词后动词用原形。'helps'应改为'help'。此外,'pain on my hand'应改为'pain in my hand',介词使用错误。