List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 你的回答有些语法错误，比如“before go to”应为“before going to”，并且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，如“delivery the door to door delivery”。同时，回答可以更直接，突出主题。

Exemplo: Sometimes I prepare a shopping list before going to the supermarket. However, recently I prefer shopping online because it is more convenient and offers door-to-door delivery within 30 minutes.

Sugestão: 回答中信息较多但缺少连贯的连接词，建议使用连接词如“and then”或“so that”来使句子更流畅。同时，注意句子结构，避免重复表达。

Exemplo: Yes, I often make a list of my daily tasks. Sometimes, I put all the information into Excel, print it out, and then follow the schedule accordingly.

Sugestão: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法和逻辑问题，如“make their work more”不明确。建议明确表达原因，使用具体词汇，并且注意句子完整性。

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they are not sure how to organize their tasks effectively or how to use tools like Excel or apps efficiently.

Sugestão: 回答较简短，最后一句不完整且不清楚。建议补充完整句子，说明原因，并使用连接词使表达更自然。

Exemplo: Actually, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient. Whenever I think of something, I can quickly add it to my list.

× Actually sometimes I would prepare a shopping list before go to the supermarket, but recently I prefer shopping online because it's more convenient and the delivery the door to door delivery within 30 minutes.

✓ Actually sometimes I would prepare a shopping list before going to the supermarket, but recently I prefer shopping online because it's more convenient and the delivery is door to door within 30 minutes.

动词短语中，介词before后面应接动名词形式，故go应改为going。此外，句中缺少动词is，导致句子不完整。

× Actually sometimes I would prepare a shopping list before go to the supermarket, but recently I prefer shopping online because it's more convenient and the delivery the door to door delivery within 30 minutes.

✓ Actually sometimes I would prepare a shopping list before going to the supermarket, but recently I prefer shopping online because it's more convenient and the delivery is door to door within 30 minutes.

句中the delivery the door to door delivery缺少系动词is，正确表达应为there is或the delivery is，表示存在或状态。

× Actually sometimes I would prepare a shopping list before go to the supermarket, but recently I prefer shopping online because it's more convenient and the delivery the door to door delivery within 30 minutes.

✓ Actually sometimes I would prepare a shopping list before going to the supermarket, but recently I prefer shopping online because it's more convenient and the delivery is door to door within 30 minutes.

句中描述现在的习惯和事实，动词prefer和is应使用一般现在时。

× Yeah, I often make a list of my daily work and I sometimes put all the information in Excel and print it out and follow the schedule accordingly.

✓ Yeah, I often make a list of my daily work and I sometimes put all the information in Excel, print it out, and follow the schedule accordingly.

句中动作是习惯性行为，使用一般现在时正确。此处主要是标点和连接词的调整，使句子更通顺。

× I think some people don't like making lists, maybe because they don't know how to make their work more and they don't know how to organize their work well with the efficient excel or apps.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists, maybe because they don't know how to do more work and they don't know how to organize their work well with efficient Excel or apps.

原句中make their work more表达不准确，应改为do more work，表示做更多的工作。Excel前不需要冠词the，且efficient前不需冠词。

× I think some people don't like making lists, maybe because they don't know how to make their work more and they don't know how to organize their work well with the efficient excel or apps.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists, maybe because they don't know how to do more work and they don't know how to organize their work well with efficient Excel or apps.

efficient是形容词，修饰Excel和apps时不需要冠词the，且Excel应大写。

× Actually, most of the time I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient. Whenever I talk about something I could just put it.

✓ Actually, most of the time I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient. Whenever I think about something, I can just put it down.

原句中talk about something用词不当，应为think about something，表达“想到某事”。此外，could改为can更符合现在时态，put it应补充动词短语put it down，表示记录。