List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by adding more specific details and using linking words to make it more natural and effective. Try to avoid redundancy and keep the answer concise within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I listed all the groceries I needed for the week, which saved me time and prevented me from buying unnecessary items.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but the sentence structure and word choice can be improved for clarity and naturalness. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, try to be more specific about how the list helps you manage your work.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a daily to-do list, especially when I have a heavy workload. This way, I can prioritize tasks based on their importance and manage my time more efficiently.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences, and explain your points with specific reasons. Also, avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and stressful. For instance, they may feel overwhelmed by seeing many tasks written down, which can discourage them from starting their work.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words for coherence. Also, try to be more concise and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can access them anytime. In contrast, paper lists can be easily lost or forgotten, so digital notes work better for me.

× Yes, I do list the works I have to do in a daily basis, sometimes when the workload is quite huge, so that I should distribute the time among the works according to their importance.

✓ Yes, I do list the work I have to do on a daily basis, sometimes when the workload is quite huge, so that I can distribute the time among the tasks according to their importance.

The word 'works' is incorrectly used in plural form; 'work' is an uncountable noun here and should be singular. Also, 'in a daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis' because 'on' is the correct preposition for time expressions like 'daily basis'. Additionally, 'works' should be replaced with 'tasks' to correctly refer to countable items. 'Should' is replaced with 'can' to express ability or possibility in this context.

× Yes, I do list the works I have to do in a daily basis, sometimes when the workload is quite huge, so that I should distribute the time among the works according to their importance.

✓ Yes, I do list the work I have to do on a daily basis, sometimes when the workload is quite huge, so that I can distribute the time among the tasks according to their importance.

The phrase 'in a daily basis' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' for expressions like 'on a daily basis'. Also, 'among the works' should be 'among the tasks' to correctly refer to countable items.

× Yes, I do list the works I have to do in a daily basis, sometimes when the workload is quite huge, so that I should distribute the time among the works according to their importance.

✓ Yes, I do list the work I have to do on a daily basis, sometimes when the workload is quite huge, so that I can distribute the time among the tasks according to their importance.

The modal verb 'should' is not appropriate here; 'can' is better to express ability or possibility to distribute time.

× I do make a list when I go for shopping because it keeps me on track.

✓ I do make a list when I go shopping because it keeps me on track.

The preposition 'for' is unnecessary after 'go' when followed by an activity like 'shopping'. The correct phrase is 'go shopping'.

× Some people avoid making lists because they think it's quite tedious and it's a extra headache in their mind, so they hesitate making lists.

✓ Some people avoid making lists because they think it's quite tedious and it's an extra headache in their mind, so they hesitate to make lists.

The article 'a' is incorrect before a vowel sound; it should be 'an extra headache'. Also, 'hesitate making lists' is incorrect; the correct form is 'hesitate to make lists'.

× Some people avoid making lists because they think it's quite tedious and it's a extra headache in their mind, so they hesitate making lists.

✓ Some people avoid making lists because they think it's quite tedious and it's an extra headache in their mind, so they hesitate to make lists.

The phrase 'in their mind' is better expressed as 'on their mind' to indicate something causing concern or worry.

× And making lists sometimes can create overwhelming scenario to.

✓ And sometimes making lists can create an overwhelming scenario too.

The sentence structure is incorrect; 'overwhelming scenario' needs an article 'an', and 'to' at the end is incorrect and should be 'too' to mean 'also'. The adverb 'sometimes' is better placed before the verb.

× I prefer taking list on my phone because I can carry it around and see whenever it needs.

✓ I prefer taking the list on my phone because I can carry it around and see it whenever needed.

The phrase 'taking list' should be 'taking the list' to specify the list. Also, 'see whenever it needs' is incorrect; it should be 'see it whenever needed'. The pronoun 'it' is necessary to refer to the list.

× But creating a list on paper, sometimes I lost it and cannot carry with me all around it.

✓ But when creating a list on paper, sometimes I lose it and cannot carry it with me everywhere.

The verb tense 'lost' should be present tense 'lose' to match the context. Also, 'carry with me all around it' is awkward; 'carry it with me everywhere' is correct. The sentence structure is improved by adding 'when'.