List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 答えは直接的で良いですが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「go to shopping centre」ではなく「go to the shopping centre」が自然です。また、「such as luxurious goods」は文脈に合わず、より具体的な例を挙げると良いでしょう。文章を簡潔にし、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げる練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I often make a shopping list when I go to the supermarket because I tend to buy unnecessary items. Therefore, making a list helps me control my spending.

Sugestão: 内容は理解できますが、文法ミスや繰り返し（"save save"）があり、表現がやや不自然です。例えば、「to save my limited time to plan and build up the overall schedule of week」は「to save time and organize my weekly schedule」のように簡潔にできます。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より流暢に話す練習をしましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, I make daily and weekly work lists because they help me save time and organize my schedule effectively. I find this method very beneficial.

Sugestão: 答えは理解できますが、文法的に不自然な部分があります。例えば、「people who don't like to make lists, they would rather choose」は「people who don't like making lists prefer to be flexible」のように修正できます。また、「exclusively busy」は不自然なので「extremely busy」など適切な語彙を使いましょう。接続詞を使って論理的に説明する練習をしてください。

Exemplo: I think people who dislike making lists prefer to stay flexible during work. Also, when they are extremely busy, lists might not be effective for them.

Sugestão: 表現が不自然で、文法ミスや繰り返し（"task work task"）があります。「make a list of my iPhone」ではなく「make a list on my iPhone」が正しいです。また、「on daytime」は「during the day」に修正しましょう。文章を簡潔にし、自然な表現を使う練習をしてください。

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my iPhone because I check it often during the day, and it's convenient to mark tasks as completed.

× Yes, I do often make a shopping list when I go to shopping centre or supermarket.

✓ Yes, I often make a shopping list when I go to the shopping centre or supermarket.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'the' before 'shopping centre' and 'supermarket'. In English, when referring to specific places like 'shopping centre' or 'supermarket', the definite article 'the' is usually required. Also, 'do often make' is less natural than 'often make'.

× This is because I usually spend too much money such as luxurious goods.

✓ This is because I usually spend too much money on luxurious goods.

The phrase 'spend too much money such as luxurious goods' is incorrect. The verb 'spend' requires the preposition 'on' before the object. Also, 'such as' is used to give examples, but here it is better to say 'on luxurious goods' to specify what the money is spent on.

× So I often make a list not to use too much money.

✓ So I often make a list to avoid spending too much money.

The original sentence 'make a list not to use too much money' is awkward and ungrammatical. The phrase 'not to use too much money' is not a correct infinitive phrase here. The corrected sentence uses 'to avoid spending too much money' which clearly expresses the purpose.

× Yes, I make a list for my work once a day and also a list for a weekly task.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work once a day and also a list for weekly tasks.

The phrase 'a list for a weekly task' is awkward because 'weekly task' is usually plural when referring to recurring tasks. Also, 'a weekly task' sounds like a single task, but the context suggests multiple tasks. Removing 'a' and pluralizing 'tasks' is more natural.

× This is because to save save my limited time to plan and build up the overall schedule of week.

✓ This is because I want to save my limited time to plan and build up the overall schedule of the week.

The original sentence is missing a subject and has a repeated word 'save'. Also, 'of week' is missing the definite article 'the'. The corrected sentence adds the subject 'I want' and fixes the article usage.

× So I think it's really beneficial.

✓ So I think it's really beneficial.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× I think people who don't like to make lists, they would rather choose to be flexible during their work time.

✓ I think people who don't like to make lists would rather choose to be flexible during their work time.

The sentence has a redundant subject 'they' after the relative clause 'people who don't like to make lists'. Removing 'they' corrects the sentence structure.

× And if people are exclusively busy, sometimes the working list does not work for them.

✓ And if people are extremely busy, sometimes the working list does not work for them.

The adverb 'exclusively' is incorrectly used here. The intended meaning is likely 'very' or 'extremely' busy. Replacing 'exclusively' with 'extremely' corrects the meaning.

× I prefer to make a list of my iPhone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my iPhone.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to indicate the device used is 'on'.

× This is because I frequently check my iPhone on daytime and also I feel comfortable to make a check on my task work task.

✓ This is because I frequently check my iPhone during the daytime and also I feel comfortable checking my work tasks.

The phrase 'on daytime' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'during the daytime'. Also, 'feel comfortable to make a check on my task work task' is awkward and ungrammatical. It is better to say 'feel comfortable checking my work tasks'. Additionally, 'task work task' seems to be a repetition and is corrected to 'work tasks'.