List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many hesitations and grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your reason and supporting it with specific details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need to buy. For example, last week I forgot to buy milk when I didn't have a list, which was inconvenient. Therefore, making a list saves me time and prevents me from forgetting important items.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then explain your reason with supporting details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: I usually do not make a list for my daily work because I prefer to keep all tasks in my mind. However, I find making a list very helpful when shopping. For work, I rely on my memory, but sometimes I write notes if the tasks are many.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use complete sentences. Provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Some people do not like making lists because they prefer to remember tasks mentally. For instance, they might find writing lists unnecessary or inconvenient. Also, some may feel that keeping lists limits their flexibility.

Sugestão: Your answer is generally clear but contains some hesitations and minor grammatical errors. Try to make your response more fluent and concise by avoiding repetition and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and easy to carry everywhere. Unlike paper lists, which I might forget or lose, my phone is always with me, so I can access my list anytime without any inconvenience.

× Uh, yes, I will make a list when I shop because it's very convenient, uh, which is give us idea that I do not, uh, I did not forget anything to buy and create inconvenience after the shopping.

✓ Uh, yes, I make a list when I shop because it's very convenient, which gives us the idea that I do not forget anything to buy and avoid inconvenience after shopping.

The use of 'will' is unnecessary here as the speaker is talking about a habitual action, so present simple tense is appropriate. Also, 'which is give us idea' is incorrect; it should be 'which gives us the idea' to agree with the singular subject 'which'. The phrase 'I did not forget' should be 'I do not forget' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Create inconvenience after the shopping' is better expressed as 'avoid inconvenience after shopping' for clarity and correctness.

× Also, I make a list because it, uh, uh, give us the idea how and fit.

✓ Also, I make a list because it gives us the idea of how to fit everything.

The verb 'give' should be in third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'idea how and fit' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'idea of how to fit everything' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Usually I do not make a list for my daily work because this that is not my thing to do a list for the work.

✓ Usually, I do not make a list for my daily work because that is not my thing, to make a list for work.

The phrase 'this that is not my thing' is incorrect; 'that is not my thing' is sufficient. Also, 'to do a list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'to make a list'. Present tense is appropriate here as the speaker talks about habitual actions.

× Yeah, I definitely make a list when I go when I going for the shopping, but for the work I have the all the list in my mind I had not that my.

✓ Yeah, I definitely make a list when I go shopping, but for work, I have all the list in my mind; I do not have a physical list.

The phrase 'when I going for the shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'when I go shopping' to use the correct present tense. 'I had not that my' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; it is corrected to 'I do not have a physical list' for clarity and correctness.

× Maybe some of the paper or want to remember task in their mind, I do not want to make a release or maybe that is the kind of thing that they do not want to keep list with them with in hand, they just want to in their mind.

✓ Maybe some people prefer to remember tasks in their mind; I do not want to make a list, or maybe that is the kind of thing where they do not want to keep a list with them in hand; they just want to keep it in their mind.

The phrase 'some of the paper or want' is incorrect; it should be 'some people prefer'. 'Make a release' is incorrect; it should be 'make a list'. 'Keep list with them with in hand' is awkward; corrected to 'keep a list with them in hand'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient, easy to carry everywhere and paper is the thing that we I have to remember to carry in my pocket or if the paper or if, if I in that case, if I lost a worthy paper, then I lost my piece and that is very inconvenient.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient and easy to carry everywhere. Paper is something I have to remember to carry in my pocket, and if I lose the paper, then I lose my list, which is very inconvenient.

The original sentence has incorrect and confusing preposition use, such as 'if I lost a worthy paper' which should be 'if I lose the paper'. The phrase 'I lost my piece' is unclear and corrected to 'I lose my list'. The sentence is split for clarity and correct preposition usage.