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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Yes, it's very important to me because I always forget what to buy when I get to the shop.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Yes, I always make a list in the morning. It can make me know what should I do in the day and it works well. Making a list can improve my sense of time.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

My friend never making a list for her work. She said it's not convenient and always waste of time.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I live in my school from Monday to Friday so I just can make a list on paper but in weekend I will make at least on my phone it's more convenient.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答较为简短且表达不够自然,建议使用更地道的表达方式,并适当扩展内容,使回答更丰富。

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget items otherwise. It helps me stay organized and saves time when I'm at the store.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 语法和表达存在错误,建议调整句子结构,使表达更自然流畅,同时增加连接词使内容连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a to-do list every morning. It helps me understand what tasks I need to complete during the day, and it works well because it improves my time management.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 语法错误较多,表达不够清晰,建议使用正确的时态和句型,并详细说明原因。

Exemplo: Some people, like my friend, don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and think it wastes time.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 句子结构混乱,语法错误较多,建议简化句子并使用连接词,使表达更清晰自然。

Exemplo: During weekdays, I prefer making lists on paper because I live at school. However, on weekends, I usually use my phone to make lists since it's more convenient.

Gramática

Verb + -ing form

× My friend never making a list for her work.

My friend never makes a list for her work.

这里的动词需要用第三人称单数形式,因为主语是单数的"My friend"。原句中使用了动名词形式"making",这是错误的。正确的形式是"makes"。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× She said it's not convenient and always waste of time.

She said it's not convenient and always a waste of time.

"waste of time"前面缺少冠词"a",因为"waste"在这里是可数名词,表示“一种浪费”。需要加冠词使表达完整。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I live in my school from Monday to Friday so I just can make a list on paper but in weekend I will make at least on my phone it's more convenient.

I live at my school from Monday to Friday, so I can only make a list on paper, but on weekends I will make at least one on my phone because it's more convenient.

"live in my school"应改为"live at my school",表示地点。"just can"顺序错误,应为"can only"。"in weekend"应为复数形式"on weekends"。"make at least on my phone"缺少数量词,应为"make at least one on my phone"。此外,句子需要适当断句和连接词。

Vocabulário

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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