List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Votre réponse est un peu répétitive et manque de fluidité. Essayez d'éviter les répétitions inutiles et de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire suivie de détails spécifiques. Par exemple, commencez par dire que vous faites toujours une liste parce que vous êtes responsable des courses, puis expliquez pourquoi cela vous aide.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I am responsible for buying groceries at home. Since my parents are busy and I have a poor memory, the list helps me remember everything I need and avoid forgetting items.

Sugestão: Votre réponse est un peu redondante et manque de fluidité. Essayez d'utiliser des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus cohérent et évitez de répéter les mêmes expressions. Par exemple, commencez par affirmer que vous utilisez des listes pour différentes tâches, puis expliquez comment cela vous aide à rester organisé.

Exemplo: Yes, I always use lists and checklists for various tasks such as shopping, studying, and planning my week. This method helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

Sugestão: Votre réponse manque de clarté et contient des hésitations. Essayez de formuler une idée claire et de la développer avec des exemples ou des raisons précises. Utilisez des mots de liaison pour structurer votre réponse et évitez les répétitions.

Exemplo: I believe some people dislike making lists because they are naturally organized and can keep track of things without writing them down. Others might find lists unnecessary because they prefer a more flexible or spontaneous approach.

Sugestão: Votre réponse est un peu hésitante et répétitive. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire et des détails précis. Évitez les hésitations et utilisez des mots de liaison pour améliorer la fluidité.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember and organize my thoughts better. I find it more effective than using my phone for notes.

× I quite I am the one responsible for shopping in my in my home.

✓ I think I am the one responsible for shopping in my home.

The phrase 'I quite I am' is incorrect and likely a misstatement. The correct phrase is 'I think I am' to express the speaker's belief. Also, the repetition of 'in my' is redundant and should be corrected to 'in my home'.

× so I I took the responsibility of shopping and I have a very bad memory so I need to make a list when I shop because if I don't do so, I really miss all.

✓ so I took the responsibility of shopping and I have a very bad memory so I need to make a list when I shop because if I don't do so, I really miss everything.

The phrase 'I really miss all' is incorrect; 'all' is not used properly here. The correct word is 'everything' to refer to all items. The past tense 'took' is appropriate here as the action happened in the past.

× I can't do anything without doing a list or doing a checklist.

✓ I can't do anything without making a list or a checklist.

The verb 'doing' is incorrectly used with 'list' and 'checklist'. The correct verb is 'making' when referring to creating lists or checklists.

× It's it's for my, for shopping, for groceries, for my study, for my weekly plan.

✓ It's for my shopping, groceries, study, and weekly plan.

The repeated use of 'for' before each noun is unnecessary and awkward. It is better to list the items separated by commas without repeating 'for' each time.

× Some people are organized in their messiness.

✓ Some people are organized in their own messiness.

The pronoun 'their' is vague here. Adding 'own' clarifies that the messiness belongs to them, improving clarity.

× I am a paper girl. I'm a paper person in everything, mainly in books and writing checklists and writing notes.

✓ I am a paper person. I'm a paper person in everything, mainly in books, writing checklists, and writing notes.

The phrase 'paper girl' is informal and may be unclear. 'Paper person' is more neutral. Also, the list should be separated by commas for clarity.

× I I always prefer writing it down and seeing it.

✓ I always prefer writing things down and seeing them.

The pronouns 'it' are vague and unclear. Using 'things' and 'them' clarifies the objects being referred to.