Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes I like it. I always make list to prepare for my shopping because I think the list can help me and helps me to sort something effectively.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
It actually depends, if something is tough and needing me to put many effort into it, I always to make a list for it because it's very effective and it usually to help me to finish my work.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Well, I think some people don't like making the lists because they find it difficult and time consuming. For example, they may feel that writing down every task takes too much effort and slows them down. Also, some people prefer to be flexible and spontaneous, so they don't like it.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is always with me, so it's very convenient and productive for me to take it on my Note app. It really helps me to save my spare time.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点,但语法和用词不够准确,且句子结构较简单。建议注意冠词的使用(如"make a list"),并尝试用更自然的表达方式,同时避免重复。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me organize my purchases efficiently and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题,如"I always to make a list"。建议简化句子结构,使用正确的时态和表达方式,使回答更自然流畅。
Exemplo: It depends. When I have challenging tasks that require a lot of effort, I always make a list because it helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 80.0Sugestão: 你的回答内容较丰富,表达清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯,同时注意"the lists"应为"lists"。
Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and tedious. Moreover, they prefer to stay flexible and spontaneous rather than following a strict plan.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答表达了观点,但部分表达不够地道,如"productive for me to take it on my Note app"。建议使用更自然的表达,并注意句子简洁。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, and using the Notes app makes it easy and quick to update my tasks, saving me time.
× I always make list to prepare for my shopping because I think the list can help me and helps me to sort something effectively.
✓ I always make a list to prepare for my shopping because I think the list can help me and helps me to sort things effectively.
这里的“list”是可数名词,表示“清单”,需要加冠词“a”。另外,“something”应改为复数形式“things”,因为这里指的是多项内容。
× if something is tough and needing me to put many effort into it, I always to make a list for it because it's very effective and it usually to help me to finish my work.
✓ if something is tough and needs me to put much effort into it, I always make a list for it because it's very effective and it usually helps me to finish my work.
“needing”应改为动词第三人称单数“needs”,因为主语是“something”。“many effort”应改为“much effort”,因为“effort”是不可数名词。动词“make”和“help”前不应有“to”,应直接用原形。
× some people don't like making the lists because they find it difficult and time consuming.
✓ some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult and time consuming.
“lists”前不需要定冠词“the”,因为这里泛指制作清单的行为,不是特指某些清单。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is always with me, so it's very convenient and productive for me to take it on my Note app.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is always with me, so it's very convenient and productive for me to use my Note app.
“take it on my Note app”表达不准确,应改为“use my Note app”,表示使用手机上的应用程序。