List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your sentences more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why making a list helps you, and conclude with a supporting detail.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember what I need to buy. Since there are many tempting items in the store, having a list keeps me focused and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.

Sugestão: Your answer is incomplete and contains some grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts fully and use clear sentence structures. Also, avoid repeating words and provide specific reasons or examples to support your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a schedule before working because it helps me manage my time efficiently. For instance, planning my tasks in advance reduces hesitation and ensures I complete everything on time.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and wordy. Try to express your ideas more directly and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid repeating phrases and provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they feel confident managing their tasks without planning. Additionally, they believe scheduling wastes time that could be spent working directly.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and better structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid minor grammatical errors. Also, try to vary your vocabulary slightly for a more natural tone.

Exemplo: I prefer writing my lists in my journal rather than on my phone because I enjoy writing by hand. Moreover, using my phone often distracts me with notifications, whereas my journal allows me to focus better.

× Yes of course I prefer to create a list before going to shopping because it helps me to remind me whatever I'm I have to buy and what not.

✓ Yes, of course I prefer to create a list before going shopping because it helps me to remember whatever I have to buy and what not.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the correct form is 'going shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'helps me to remind me' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'helps me to remember'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes of course I prefer to create a list before going to shopping because it helps me to remind me whatever I'm I have to buy and what not.

✓ Yes, of course I prefer to create a list before going shopping because it helps me remember whatever I have to buy and what not.

The original sentence has redundancy and awkward phrasing such as 'helps me to remind me' and 'whatever I'm I have to buy'. Simplifying to 'helps me remember whatever I have to buy' corrects the sentence structure and improves readability.

× Because whenever I go to shop there are variety of things that are in front of me and it makes me curious to have everything.

✓ Because whenever I go shopping, there are a variety of things in front of me and it makes me curious to have everything.

The phrase 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'there are variety of things' is missing the article 'a' before 'variety'. Adding commas improves sentence flow.

× But once I take my list I know what I have to.

✓ But once I take my list, I know what I have to buy.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'what I have to'. Adding the verb 'buy' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× Making a schedule before working can be very helpful in my my life because I have always been a person who planned before doing anything as it saves my time and does not make me hesitate of doing anything wrong it all.

✓ Making a schedule before working can be very helpful in my life because I have always been a person who plans before doing anything as it saves my time and does not make me hesitate to do anything wrong at all.

The phrase 'my my life' has a repeated word; it should be 'my life'. 'Who planned' should be 'who plans' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Hesitate of doing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'hesitate to do'. 'It all' should be 'at all' to convey the intended meaning.

× It also saves a lot of my.

✓ It also saves me a lot of time.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'me a lot of time' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× Individuals do not prefer to make the schedule before starting the work because they are so sure about the things they are going to pursue within the time and according to the according to person to person, those individuals do not want to waste their time while scheduling instead of just implementing this.

✓ Individuals do not prefer to make a schedule before starting work because they are sure about the things they are going to pursue within the time, and according to person to person, those individuals do not want to waste their time scheduling instead of just implementing it.

The phrase 'make the schedule' should be 'make a schedule' as it is general. 'Starting the work' is better as 'starting work'. The repeated phrase 'according to the according to' is corrected to 'according to'. 'Waste their time while scheduling' is better as 'waste their time scheduling'. 'Implementing this' should be 'implementing it' for clarity.

× If I have my journal, I prefer to write it on it rather than using the phone because I love writing manually then typing on my phone.

✓ If I have my journal, I prefer to write in it rather than use the phone because I love writing manually rather than typing on my phone.

The phrase 'write it on it' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'write in it'. 'Rather than using' should be 'rather than use' to maintain parallel structure. 'Then typing' should be 'rather than typing' to correctly express contrast.

× The phone distracts me a lot with different notifications, but on the other hand if I use my journal it there are no distractions that make me feel more comfortable.

✓ The phone distracts me a lot with different notifications, but on the other hand, if I use my journal, there are no distractions, which makes me feel more comfortable.

The sentence is missing commas after introductory phrases and clauses. 'It there are no distractions' is incorrect; it should be 'there are no distractions'. Adding commas and correcting the clause improves clarity and grammatical correctness.