List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Perbaiki pengucapan dan hindari pengulangan kata seperti 'I I' dan 'umm'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas agar jawaban terdengar lebih alami dan efektif.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes make a shopping list because without it, I tend to buy unnecessary items, which can make me spend more money than planned.

Sugestão: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat, serta hindari pengulangan dan kesalahan kata kerja. Jelaskan dengan lebih jelas bagaimana Anda mengatur pekerjaan Anda.

Exemplo: I used to make lists for my work, but they didn't help much. Now, I prefer using sticky notes to prioritize my tasks effectively.

Sugestão: Perjelas ide dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur. Hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap dan gunakan linking words untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find them confusing or restrictive, and they prefer flexibility to improve their work in other ways.

Sugestão: Perbaiki pengucapan dan tata bahasa, serta buat kalimat yang lengkap dan jelas. Jelaskan alasan preferensi Anda dengan lebih spesifik dan gunakan linking words.

Exemplo: As a member of Gen Z, I prefer making lists on my phone because I can easily edit them and carry my phone everywhere, unlike paper lists which feel outdated.

× I would like to umm, buy another things that were not in my list

✓ I would like to umm, buy other things that were not in my list

The word 'another' is used with singular countable nouns, but 'things' is plural. The correct quantifier for plural nouns is 'other'. Penggunaan 'another' untuk kata benda jamak salah, harus menggunakan 'other' untuk benda jamak.

× I think that I would go, I become broke if I like that

✓ I think that I would go broke if I did that

The phrase 'go broke' is an idiomatic expression meaning to become bankrupt. 'Become broke' is less common and 'if I like that' is incorrect; it should be 'if I did that' to express a hypothetical situation in the past tense. Frasa idiomatik 'go broke' lebih tepat daripada 'become broke'. 'If I like that' salah, harus 'if I did that' untuk situasi hipotetik.

× I have ever make a list for my work but it doesn't work

✓ I have made a list for my work but it doesn't work

The present perfect tense requires the past participle form 'made' instead of the base form 'make'. 'Have ever make' is incorrect. Present perfect tense harus menggunakan past participle 'made', bukan bentuk dasar 'make'.

× I didn't I doesn't make a list for now to my work

✓ I don't make a list for my work now

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly and uses 'doesn't' with 'I'. The correct form is 'I don't' for present tense negative. Penggunaan 'doesn't' dengan subjek 'I' salah, harus 'don't'. Kalimat juga harus konsisten dalam waktu.

× I just make a sticky notes that I prioritize the most to

✓ I just make sticky notes that I prioritize the most

The preposition 'to' at the end is unnecessary and incorrect here. Also, 'a sticky notes' is incorrect because 'notes' is plural. Preposisi 'to' tidak diperlukan di akhir kalimat. 'A sticky notes' salah karena 'notes' jamak.

× I think that because it just confused them, confusing them so

✓ I think that it just confuses them, confuses them so

The verb should be in present tense 'confuses' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Confused' is past participle and 'confusing' is present participle, both incorrect here. Kata kerja harus dalam bentuk present 'confuses' untuk subjek tunggal 'it'.

× or maybe they just don't want to stick at one list instead of improve their work

✓ or maybe they just don't want to stick to one list instead of improving their work

The correct preposition with 'stick' is 'to', not 'at'. Also, after 'instead of' the verb should be in gerund form 'improving'. Preposisi yang benar dengan 'stick' adalah 'to'. Setelah 'instead of' harus menggunakan bentuk gerund.

× I can't. I think that they can improve their work beside

✓ I can't. I think that they can improve their work besides

The word 'beside' means 'next to', but the intended meaning is 'in addition', which is 'besides'. 'Beside' berarti 'di samping', sedangkan maksudnya adalah 'selain itu' yaitu 'besides'.

× As is Genzy, I would like to say that I prefer Megalis on my phone

✓ As is trendy, I would like to say that I prefer making lists on my phone

'Genzy' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation of 'trendy' or 'gen Z'. 'Megalis' is likely 'making lists'. Correcting to meaningful words. 'Genzy' dan 'Megalis' tampaknya salah ucap, diperbaiki menjadi kata yang benar dan bermakna.

× I can't bring it wherever I go to wherever I go

✓ I can bring it wherever I go

The phrase is repeated unnecessarily. Also, 'can't' contradicts the intended meaning of being able to bring the list. Frasa diulang dan 'can't' bertentangan dengan maksud kalimat.