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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

To be honest, I don't like to make lists because I am quite lazy and it is very convenient for myself to make, at least when I shop. But sometime when I have significant things to buy, I will make at least.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

And I don't make a list for my daily daily work, but in some special times such as the guidelines I will make at least to ensure I don't forget these items.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

For someone who don't have this habit to make a list during their daily life, in their opinion, make a list is very unconvenient for themselves, so they maybe don't have a list.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I prefer to make at least on my and my is always with me and I will not forget to check my list and the one I have a significant thing to write in.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 5.5Fluência e coerência: 5.5Pronúncia: 5.5Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 5.5

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 你的回答表达了观点,但语言不够自然,句子结构混乱,且有语法错误。建议简化句子,避免重复,使用更自然的表达方式。

Exemplo: I usually don't make a shopping list because I find it convenient to shop without one. However, if I need to buy important items, I do make a list to avoid forgetting anything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 55.0

Sugestão: 回答中有重复词汇和语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题,使用连贯的句子,并且避免重复。

Exemplo: I don't usually make lists for my daily work, but when I have important tasks or guidelines, I make a list to make sure I don't forget anything.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 50.0

Sugestão: 句子结构不完整且有语法错误,表达不够流畅。建议使用简单句子,明确表达观点,并注意主谓一致。

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it inconvenient and prefer to remember things without writing them down.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 45.0

Sugestão: 回答不完整且含糊,缺少关键细节。建议明确表达偏好,说明原因,并使用完整句子。

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I won't forget to check my list or add important items.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× But sometime when I have significant things to buy, I will make at least.

But sometimes when I have significant things to buy, I will make at least.

sometime 应为复数形式 sometimes,表示“有时”。

Singular and plural issue

× And I don't make a list for my daily daily work, but in some special times such as the guidelines I will make at least to ensure I don't forget these items.

And I don't make a list for my daily work, but at special times such as when following guidelines, I will make at least to ensure I don't forget these items.

daily daily 是重复,应去掉一个daily;some special times 改为 at special times 更自然。

Singular and plural issue

× For someone who don't have this habit to make a list during their daily life, in their opinion, make a list is very unconvenient for themselves, so they maybe don't have a list.

For someone who doesn't have this habit to make a list during their daily life, in their opinion, making a list is very inconvenient for them, so they maybe don't have a list.

someone 是单数,谓语动词应用 doesn't;unconvenient 拼写错误,应为 inconvenient;make a list 应改为 making a list 作为主语。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× For someone who don't have this habit to make a list during their daily life, in their opinion, make a list is very unconvenient for themselves, so they maybe don't have a list.

For someone who doesn't have this habit to make a list during their daily life, in their opinion, making a list is very inconvenient for them, so they maybe don't have a list.

themselves 用法不当,指代不明确,改为 them 更合适。

Singular and plural issue

× I prefer to make at least on my and my is always with me and I will not forget to check my list and the one I have a significant thing to write in.

I prefer to make at least on my phone, which is always with me, and I will not forget to check my list and write down significant things.

句子缺少名词,my 后应接名词 phone;句子结构混乱,需调整使表达清晰。

Vocabulário

LazyIdle
SpecialExceptional; Distinctive; Momentous; Specific
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