List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to keep your answer more focused and avoid unnecessary or unclear references like mentioning medical conditions. Start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific reasons or examples why you make lists when shopping. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need. For example, last week I wrote down all the ingredients for a recipe, which made shopping faster and more efficient.

Sugestão: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Even if you don't have a job now, give a clear and complete answer about your future plans. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why making lists would help you at work.

Exemplo: I don't have a job right now, but in the future, I plan to make lists to organize my tasks and manage my time effectively. This will help me stay focused and complete my work on time.

Sugestão: Try to avoid repeating phrases like "I think that they think" and be more concise. Provide clearer reasons with examples and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming. Also, everyone has different preferences; some prefer to finish tasks quickly without planning.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and structured. Start with a direct preference, then give specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words like "or something" and "and yeah" to sound more natural.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's faster and more convenient. For instance, I never lose my phone, but paper lists can easily get lost.

× Yeah, I love organizing my stuff really well. So I feel like I'm AI, don't know what it's called.

✓ Yeah, I love organizing my stuff really well. So I feel like I have ADHD, but I don't know what it's called.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'I'm AI' which is unclear and likely a misstatement. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by specifying 'I have ADHD'. This improves clarity and corrects pronoun usage.

× It's either of them.

✓ It's either of those.

The phrase 'either of them' is less appropriate here; 'either of those' correctly refers to the two conditions mentioned (ADHD or OCD). This improves pronoun reference clarity.

× I do not have a job at the moment, but however, in the future I look forward to creating umm, I look forward to creating lists to help me organize my stuff and manage my time better.

✓ I do not have a job at the moment; however, in the future, I look forward to creating lists to help me organize my stuff and manage my time better.

Using both 'but' and 'however' together is redundant. Replacing 'but however' with just 'however' and adjusting punctuation improves sentence structure and flow.

× And from what I have heard, making.

✓ And from what I have heard, making lists is helpful.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb or object to complete the thought. Adding 'lists is helpful' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× I feel like people don't like making lists because I think that they think that it's time consuming and it's just different for everyone I guess.

✓ I feel like people don't like making lists because they think it's time-consuming and that it's just different for everyone, I guess.

The original sentence has redundant pronouns and awkward phrasing. Simplifying 'I think that they think that' to 'they think' and adding a hyphen in 'time-consuming' improves clarity and grammar.

× So everyone has their own opinions and their own likings and some people love to get it done quickly and some people don't.

✓ So everyone has their own opinions and preferences, and some people love to get things done quickly while others don't.

'Likings' is not commonly used; 'preferences' is more appropriate. Also, 'get it done' is vague; 'get things done' is clearer. Adding 'while others don't' improves sentence balance.

× I'd say that it's easier making a list on your phone since you don't have to write it on a paper or something.

✓ I'd say that it's easier to make a list on your phone since you don't have to write it on paper or something.

The phrase 'easier making' should be 'easier to make' to correctly use the infinitive form after 'easier'. Also, 'write it on a paper' should be 'write it on paper' as 'paper' is uncountable here.

× And I would recommend for people to take notes on their phone.

✓ And I would recommend people take notes on their phone.

The phrase 'recommend for people to' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'recommend people to' or 'recommend that people'. Removing 'for' corrects the preposition usage.