List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it includes filler words like "umm" and some redundancy. Try to avoid fillers and be more concise while maintaining naturalness. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop at the convenience store because it helps me control my budget and save time.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Work on sentence structure and verb forms. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting work. I categorize tasks into urgent and non-urgent to manage my day effectively.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes and filler words. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid fillers. Use linking words to connect your points logically.

Exemplo: Some people prefer to go with the flow because they keep their tasks in mind and sometimes their mood influences how they work, so they don't feel the need to make lists.

Sugestão: Your answer has several errors and unclear phrases, such as "make a lid" and "non urgent talk." Focus on correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, avoid filler words and be concise.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier for me to organize and prioritize urgent and non-urgent tasks for the day.

× Some people prefer to just go with the floor.

✓ Some people prefer to just go with the flow.

The phrase 'go with the floor' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'go with the flow,' which means to accept things as they come. This is a vocabulary error rather than a strict grammar error, but it affects the sentence's meaning.

× and umm, sometimes they it depends on their mood or their feeling at that time.

✓ and umm, sometimes it depends on their mood or their feeling at that time.

The phrase 'they it depends' is incorrect because 'they' is an unnecessary pronoun here. The correct subject is 'it' referring to the situation. Removing 'they' corrects the sentence structure.

× I always make A to do list for the assignment that I have to do.

✓ I always make a to-do list for the assignment that I have to do.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to correctly form the noun phrase. This is an article and compound noun formation issue.

× Before start working, I always make A to do list for the assignment that I have to do.

✓ Before starting work, I always make a to-do list for the assignment that I have to do.

The phrase 'Before start working' is incorrect; the gerund form 'starting' should be used after 'before.' Also, 'working' can be replaced with 'work' for smoother phrasing.

× I always categorize the urgent and not urgent tasks that I need to complete within the day before start working.

✓ I always categorize the urgent and not urgent tasks that I need to complete within the day before starting work.

Similar to the previous correction, 'before start working' should be 'before starting work' to use the correct gerund form after 'before.'

× Some people prefer to just go with the floor. They don't want to do the least because they already have the task that they want to do in their head

✓ Some people prefer to just go with the flow. They don't want to do the list because they already have the tasks that they want to do in their head

The phrase 'do the least' is likely a typo for 'do the list.' Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match 'they' and the context of multiple tasks in their head.

× I prefer to make a lid on paper because for me personally, it's easier to organize on the tags.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because for me personally, it's easier to organize the tasks.

'Make a lid' is a typo for 'make a list.' Also, 'organize on the tags' is incorrect; it should be 'organize the tasks.' This corrects vocabulary and preposition usage.

× I always categorize the urgent tasks and non urgent talk to prioritize uh, the assignment that I have to complete within the day and it tells me two minutes.

✓ I always categorize the urgent tasks and non-urgent tasks to prioritize, uh, the assignments that I have to complete within the day, and it tells me the time.

'Non urgent talk' should be 'non-urgent tasks.' Also, 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' to match the context. The phrase 'it tells me two minutes' is unclear; 'it tells me the time' is more appropriate. This corrects quantifier, noun form, and clarity issues.