List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly stating your habit and reason, and avoid redundancy. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'do make' and 'I this is'.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I have a very stressful job and often forget things. Making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't miss anything.

Sugestão: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'I have any stressful job' and 'it is work full'. Try to use clearer sentences and linking words to explain how making lists helps you at work.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make lists for my work. Since my job is stressful, lists help me save time and energy by keeping me organized and focused.

Sugestão: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions, and connect your ideas smoothly with linking words.

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they have sharp memories and prefer to rely on themselves. Also, they might feel that lists limit their freedom or spontaneity.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammar errors and could be more concise. Use correct tense and clearer linking to explain your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because I grew up in the 90s when phones were not common. Since childhood, I've been used to writing lists by hand, so it feels more natural to me.

× Yes I always do and I believe everyone should do make a list when people are going to the shop as I believe I work in very stressful job so I can't remember to make a list.

✓ Yes, I always do and I believe everyone should make a list when people go to the shop as I believe I work in a very stressful job so I can't remember to make a list.

The phrase 'should do make a list' is incorrect; 'should make a list' is correct because 'should' is a modal verb followed directly by the base form of the verb. Also, 'people are going to the shop' is better as 'people go to the shop' for habitual action. 'I work in very stressful job' lacks an article; it should be 'a very stressful job.'

× Yes I always do and I believe everyone should do make a list when people are going to the shop as I believe I work in very stressful job so I can't remember to make a list.

✓ Yes, I always do and I believe everyone should make a list when people go to the shop as I believe I work in a very stressful job so I can't remember to make a list.

The phrase 'work in very stressful job' is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very stressful job' because 'job' is a singular countable noun and requires an article.

× I this is very helpful for me.

✓ This is very helpful for me.

The word 'I' is unnecessary and incorrect here; the sentence should start with 'This is very helpful for me.'

× As I said before I have any stressful job and I can remember so making a list for work reduce my time and save my energy so that I make a list for my work and it is work full.

✓ As I said before, I have a stressful job and I can't remember everything, so making a list for work reduces my time and saves my energy. That is why I make a list for my work and it is useful.

'I have any stressful job' is incorrect; 'any' is not used in affirmative sentences here, 'a stressful job' is correct. 'I can remember' should be 'I can't remember' to make sense. 'Making a list for work reduce' should be 'reduces' to agree with singular subject. 'It is work full' is incorrect; 'useful' is the correct adjective.

× I think some people don't like making a list because maybe they are memory is very sharp, they can remember everything and they are very independent.

✓ I think some people don't like making a list because maybe their memory is very sharp, they can remember everything and they are very independent.

'They are memory' is incorrect; the possessive pronoun 'their' should be used to indicate possession of 'memory.'

× They don't want to limited their self by some by preparing a list items.

✓ They don't want to limit themselves by preparing a list of items.

'Limited' is the past participle, but here the base form 'limit' is needed after 'want to.' 'Their self' is incorrect; the reflexive pronoun 'themselves' should be used. 'By some by preparing a list items' is awkward; 'by preparing a list of items' is correct.

× When I was grew up, there was no phone and I used to make a list on paper from my childhood.

✓ When I grew up, there was no phone and I used to make a list on paper from my childhood.

'Was grew up' is incorrect; 'grew up' is the simple past tense and does not need 'was.'

× I always prefer to make a list on paper because I am a kid of 90s.

✓ I always prefer to make a list on paper because I am a kid of the 90s.

The phrase 'kid of 90s' is missing the definite article 'the' before '90s' to specify the decade.