Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I always create a digital list to avoid forgotten some important things and I think it can save more time to find some things and can.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Absolutely, I think make a list in work is a very important thing because it can prioritize my tasks and to avoid do some waste time thing.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think maybe they like to be more flexible and they can and in this time they can have more time to do the other things.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Oh, I prefer to make a list on my phone. I think the digital list is so convenient because you know, the phone is always on my hand and I can write down something now.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 你的回答表达了主要意思,但语法错误较多,且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意动词形式和句子完整性,避免重复和不连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, I always create a digital shopping list to avoid forgetting important items. It also helps me save time when looking for things.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确的问题,建议使用正确的动词形式和更具体的词汇来表达观点。
Exemplo: Absolutely, I think making a list at work is very important because it helps me prioritize tasks and avoid wasting time on unimportant activities.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,建议补充完整句子并具体说明原因,使回答更连贯。
Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be more flexible and believe it allows them more time to do other things.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答较为自然,但有些口语化表达和语法问题,建议使用更正式的表达并注意句子结构。
Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient. Since I always have my phone with me, I can quickly write down anything I need to remember.
× Yes, I always create a digital list to avoid forgotten some important things and I think it can save more time to find some things and can.
✓ Yes, I always create a digital list to avoid forgetting some important things, and I think it can save more time when finding some things.
这里动词短语中应使用动名词形式,'forgotten'是过去分词,正确用法是'avoiding forgetting',但此处只需'avoid forgetting'。另外,句子后半部分表达不完整,调整为更自然的表达。
× Absolutely, I think make a list in work is a very important thing because it can prioritize my tasks and to avoid do some waste time thing.
✓ Absolutely, I think making a list at work is very important because it can help prioritize my tasks and avoid wasting time on some things.
动词短语中应使用动名词'making','make'不符合语法。'at work'是正确的介词搭配。'to avoid do'应改为'avoid doing','waste time thing'表达不自然,应改为' wasting time on some things'。
× Absolutely, I think make a list in work is a very important thing because it can prioritize my tasks and to avoid do some waste time thing.
✓ Absolutely, I think making a list at work is very important because it can help prioritize my tasks and avoid wasting time on some things.
介词'in work'应改为'at work',表示在工作场所或工作期间。
× I think maybe they like to be more flexible and they can and in this time they can have more time to do the other things.
✓ I think maybe they like to be more flexible, and at this time they can have more time to do other things.
句中'and they can and'结构不完整,应删除多余部分。'in this time'应改为'at this time',更符合习惯用法。
× I think maybe they like to be more flexible and they can and in this time they can have more time to do the other things.
✓ I think maybe they like to be more flexible, and at this time they can have more time to do other things.
介词'in this time'应改为'at this time',表示特定时间点。
× I think maybe they like to be more flexible and they can and in this time they can have more time to do the other things.
✓ I think maybe they like to be more flexible, and at this time they can have more time to do other things.
'the other things'应改为'other things',表示泛指其他事情。
× Oh, I prefer to make a list on my phone. I think the digital list is so convenient because you know, the phone is always on my hand and I can write down something now.
✓ Oh, I prefer to make a list on my phone. I think the digital list is so convenient because, you know, the phone is always in my hand and I can write down something anytime.
介词'on my hand'应改为'in my hand',表示手中。'now'改为'anytime'更符合表达随时记录的意思。