List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to use more natural phrasing and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'buy the stuff', you can say 'buy what I need'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me focus on buying what I need, and as a result, I avoid purchasing unnecessary items.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use linking words like 'however' to connect ideas and correct verb forms for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work; however, it doesn't always work because my manager often assigns urgent tasks that I have to prioritize.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct vocabulary. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use linking words such as 'because' or 'since' to explain reasons.

Exemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel it limits their choices and prevents them from buying a variety of products.

Sugestão: Your answer is good but can be improved by removing filler words and making it more concise. Use linking words like 'so' to connect ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is handy and reliable, so I can easily check my notes to see which products I need to buy.

× Yes, I do make a list when I shop because it will be helpful for me to buy the stuff and not be carried away from buying any unnecessary products.

✓ Yes, I do make a list when I shop because it is helpful for me to buy the stuff and not get carried away buying any unnecessary products.

The phrase 'not be carried away from buying' is incorrect. The correct form is 'not get carried away buying' where 'get carried away' is the proper verb phrase and 'buying' is the present participle used correctly here.

× Yes, I do make a list while I work, but unfortunately it doesn't work for me all the time because my manager comes up with a very urgent work and have to work on it.

✓ Yes, I do make a list while I work, but unfortunately it doesn't work for me all the time because my manager comes up with very urgent work and I have to work on it.

The phrase 'a very urgent work' is incorrect because 'work' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Also, 'have to work' lacks the subject 'I'. Correct subject-verb agreement requires 'I have to work'.

× Uh, I believe that you know making Li list will compress them of not buying a variety of other products. Hence I think they don't make list.

✓ Uh, I believe that making a list will prevent them from buying a variety of other products. Hence, I think they don't make lists.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun use and incorrect words like 'compress them of'. The correct phrase is 'prevent them from'. Also, 'making Li list' is a typo and should be 'making a list'. 'Don't make list' should be 'don't make lists' to agree in number.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very handy and reliable at the same time, and I can use my phone and look into my notes and see what all, uh, products I have to buy.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very handy and reliable at the same time, and I can use my phone to look at my notes and see all the products I have to buy.

The phrase 'look into my notes' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'look at'. Also, 'see what all, uh, products' is informal and better expressed as 'see all the products'.