ListPart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Of course, yes, that can make me very organized and I can remember everything I need to buy easily.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Of course, yes, you know that there are a lot of assignments that I need to accomplish when I am working, so make a list is a very convenient way for me to finish these things and it really work very well.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Well, from my perspective, maybe because they think making a list is very complex things and they are very lazy, so they don't want to make a list to organize other things.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

Well, I prefer to make a list by cell phone. You know, that is very convenient for me to reverse everything in my cell phone and I can take them to remind myself what I need to do next and what has been accomplished in time and and.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 75.0

Sugestão: 回答较为简单,缺少连贯的连接词和具体细节。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”或“so”,并具体说明列清单如何帮助你购物。

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: 句子结构不够自然,语法错误较多。建议简化句子,使用连接词如“because”来表达原因,并注意主谓一致。

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because I have many tasks to complete, and it helps me manage my time effectively.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: 表达不够自然,语法和用词错误较多。建议使用更准确的词汇,如“complicated”代替“complex things”,并避免重复。

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it complicated and prefer to keep things simple.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 60.0

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题,如“reverse everything”用词不当。建议使用更准确的表达,并保持句子简洁。

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and helps me keep track of my tasks and completed items easily.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× so make a list is a very convenient way for me to finish these things and it really work very well.

so making a list is a very convenient way for me to finish these things and it really works very well.

这里'so make a list'中的'make'应改为动名词'making',因为它作为主语使用。'work'应改为'works',因为主语是单数第三人称。

Verb + -ing form

× so make a list is a very convenient way for me to finish these things and it really work very well.

so making a list is a very convenient way for me to finish these things and it really works very well.

'make'作为主语时应使用动名词形式'making'。

Singular and plural issue

× maybe because they think making a list is very complex things and they are very lazy, so they don't want to make a list to organize other things.

maybe because they think making a list is a very complex thing and they are very lazy, so they don't want to make a list to organize other things.

'complex things'应改为单数形式'a very complex thing',因为这里指的是一个整体的概念。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Well, I prefer to make a list by cell phone.

Well, I prefer to make a list on my cell phone.

习惯用法中,'make a list on my cell phone'更自然,'by cell phone'不合适。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× You know, that is very convenient for me to reverse everything in my cell phone and I can take them to remind myself what I need to do next and what has been accomplished in time and and.

You know, it is very convenient for me to review everything on my cell phone and I can use it to remind myself what I need to do next and what has been accomplished on time.

'that'应改为'it'指代前文;'reverse'应为'review';'in my cell phone'应为'on my cell phone';'take them'不合适,应改为'use it';'in time and and'重复且用词错误,应为'on time'。

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