List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ваш ответ звучит немного неестественно и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь использовать более простые и правильные конструкции, избегая излишних слов и повторов. Также добавьте связующие слова для логичности.

Exemplo: No, I usually don't make a shopping list. Instead, I walk through the aisles and buy what I need when I see it.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит много пауз и повторов, что снижает его естественность. Рекомендуется использовать более чёткие и связные предложения, а также избегать лишних слов и звуков.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a list for work. Instead, I write notes to remind myself of urgent tasks or things I need to do next week.

Sugestão: Ответ не совсем ясен и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь отвечать прямо на вопрос, используя простые и понятные предложения с конкретными причинами.

Exemplo: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or unnecessary.

Sugestão: Ответ немного запутан и содержит ошибки. Лучше использовать более чёткие и логичные предложения, объясняя причины предпочтения.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because I can see them on my desk anytime, which helps me remember tasks better.

× I don't do any list of my shopping because usually I go through the lines and if I see something I need to buy, I just buy it.

✓ I don't make any list for my shopping because usually I go through the aisles and if I see something I need to buy, I just buy it.

The phrase 'do any list' is incorrect; the correct verb collocation is 'make a list'. Also, 'lines' should be 'aisles' when referring to shopping areas. Use 'make a list' to express the action of creating a list.

× No, I prefer uh, keep working about any list.

✓ No, I prefer to keep working without any list.

The preposition 'about' is incorrectly used here. The correct phrase is 'keep working without any list' to express working without using a list.

× Usually I'd I'd write some notes.

✓ Usually I'd write some notes.

The repetition 'I'd I'd' is a speech error and should be corrected to a single 'I'd'.

× Maybe on next week so I will see this note and I will be on time.

✓ Maybe next week I will see this note and I will be on time.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary before 'next week'. The correct expression is 'next week' without 'on'.

× I'm not sure about these because I'm not other people, I'm just a person who has his own opinion and from my point of view, lots of people don't like to do notes because they don't want to to do lots of talk they don't need.

✓ I'm not sure about that because I'm not other people; I'm just a person who has my own opinion and from my point of view, lots of people don't like to take notes because they don't want to do lots of talking they don't need.

The pronoun 'these' is incorrect; 'that' is more appropriate. Also, 'his own opinion' should be 'my own opinion' to match the speaker. 'Do notes' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'take notes'. 'Do lots of talk' should be 'do lots of talking'.

× Paper list is the best one for me. I see it on my table, I can click it on my desk on my screen so I will see anytime I need it.

✓ A paper list is the best one for me. I see it on my table; I can click it on my desk or on my screen so I can see it anytime I need it.

The article 'A' is needed before 'paper list'. The phrase 'click it on my desk on my screen' is unclear; 'or' is better to indicate alternatives. Also, 'I will see anytime I need it' should be 'I can see it anytime I need it' for correct modal verb usage.