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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

Well, I always make a list before I go shopping because a good list can help me to avoid forgetting anything that I want to buy.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Well, I always make a list for my work and it really works for me because I can manage my time efficiently as well as stay organized.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Well, I think some people, they just don't like to make lists because they want to be free. They don't like feel that they have to do something in some specific time.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

Well, definitely I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can, uh, see my list anytime, anywhere because I always bring my phone with me and I can change the list freely.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.5Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 6.0Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 85.0

Sugestão: 你的回答比较自然且直接,但可以避免重复表达,比如“make a list”和“a good list”之间的重复。建议使用更多连接词来丰富句子结构,使表达更流畅。

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need, and this way I can shop more efficiently.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 90.0

Sugestão: 回答结构清晰,表达了原因,但可以增加一些具体细节来支持观点,比如举例说明如何管理时间和保持有序。

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks, which helps me prioritize my duties and meet deadlines effectively.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 80.0

Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误,如“don't like feel”应为“don't like to feel”。建议注意语法准确性,并用更具体的词汇表达观点。

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility and don't want to feel pressured by strict schedules.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 88.0

Sugestão: 回答自然且内容完整,但口语中“uh”影响流畅度。建议减少口头语,并尝试使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone since I can access and update them anytime and anywhere, which is very convenient.

Gramática

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Well, I think some people, they just don't like to make lists because they want to be free.

Well, I think some people just don't like to make lists because they want to be free.

句子中出现了重复的主语“some people”和“they”,这是代词使用错误。应去掉其中一个,使句子结构简洁正确。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× They don't like feel that they have to do something in some specific time.

They don't like to feel that they have to do something at some specific time.

动词“like”后应接不定式“to feel”,且表示具体时间点时应使用介词“at”而非“in”。此处应改为“like to feel”和“at some specific time”。

Vocabulário

FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
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