List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat long and a bit repetitive. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, avoid adding unnecessary phrases like 'Thank you' at the end. Use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Exemplo: I usually don't make a list when I shop. Instead, I browse the mall and buy what I need based on what I remember and see. This way, I can be flexible and pick up things I might have forgotten.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, try to avoid minor grammar mistakes like 'A to do list' instead of 'a to-do list'.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning. It includes various tasks I need to complete during the day, such as places to visit and people to call. This helps me stay organized and focused.

Sugestão: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid repeating the question in your answer. Also, try to give more specific reasons and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive. For example, they might not complete all tasks, or prices may change, making the list less useful. Therefore, they prefer to be more spontaneous.

Sugestão: Your answer is very brief. Try to expand it by giving reasons and using linking words to make it more natural and informative.

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on paper because it's easier to write quickly and I can see everything at once. Also, I find it more satisfying to cross off items by hand.

× Most often time I do not make a list before I shop.

✓ Most of the time I do not make a list before I shop.

The phrase 'Most often time' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'Most of the time' to indicate frequency. This is a common singular/plural collocation issue where 'time' is singular and needs the preposition 'of' to form the correct phrase.

× This list covers a wide range of varieties of activities that I'm going to be doing from the day, ranging from where to go people to call.

✓ This list covers a wide range of activities that I'm going to be doing during the day, ranging from where to go to people to call.

The phrase 'varieties of activities' is redundant and awkward; 'a wide range of activities' is more natural. Also, 'from the day' should be 'during the day' to indicate the time period. The sentence also needed 'to' before 'people to call' to maintain parallel structure.

× Why don't two people like making a list?

✓ Why don't some people like making a list?

The original sentence uses 'two people' which is specific and likely incorrect in context. The question is about a general group, so 'some people' is appropriate. This is a singular/plural and quantifier issue.

× most often times when you make a list, at the end of the day you don't even get what's on the list

✓ most often times when you make a list, at the end of the day you don't even get what is on the list

The phrase 'most often times' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'most of the time' or 'often'. Also, 'what's' is a contraction of 'what is' and is acceptable, but in formal correction, expanding it improves clarity. The main issue is the plural form 'times' which should be singular in this context.

× the prices are quite different from what are they initially.

✓ the prices are quite different from what they were initially.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing verb tense. The correct form is 'what they were initially' to indicate past state. This is an issue with sentence structure and verb tense combined with preposition usage.

× I prefer to make a list on my paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper.

The phrase 'on my paper' is incorrect because 'paper' here is uncountable and does not require a possessive pronoun. The correct preposition usage is 'on paper' to indicate the medium.