List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하지만, 반복되는 표현과 어색한 문장 구조가 있습니다. 예를 들어, 'I usually forget what I want, so make a list'에서 주어가 빠져있고, 'uh' 같은 불필요한 말은 피하는 것이 좋습니다. 좀 더 구체적인 이유나 예시를 덧붙여 답변을 풍부하게 만드는 연습을 하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need. For example, last week I forgot to buy milk when I didn't have a list, so now I never shop without one.

Sugestão: 문법 오류와 어색한 표현이 있습니다. 'I always write down I have to do things' 대신 'I always write down the tasks I have to do'와 같이 명확하게 표현하세요. 또한, 'put put it on my desk'는 중복된 단어로 수정이 필요합니다. 문장을 간결하고 정확하게 만드는 연습을 하세요.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list before starting my day. I write down the tasks I need to complete on a piece of paper and place it on my desk. This method helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

Sugestão: 'bordered'는 잘못된 단어 선택이며, 'boring'이나 'tedious'가 적절합니다. 또한, 문법 오류가 많아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 문장을 간결하고 정확하게 만들고, 예시를 명확히 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: I think some people find making lists boring or unnecessary. For example, my friend doesn't feel the need to make a list because she prefers to remember her daily tasks mentally.

Sugestão: 'I like write down on papers'는 문법적으로 틀렸고, 'It is the effective for me'도 어색합니다. 'definitely'의 위치도 자연스럽지 않습니다. 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하며, 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하는 연습을 하세요.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer making lists on paper because I rarely check scheduling apps on my phone. Writing things down and placing the list on my desk helps me remember tasks more effectively.

× This is because making a list can help me to remember what I wanted.

✓ This is because making a list can help me to remember what I want.

The verb 'wanted' is in the past tense, but the sentence refers to a general present situation. The correct form is the base form 'want' to match the present tense context.

× so make a list.

✓ so I make a list.

The sentence is missing the subject 'I', which is necessary for a complete sentence structure.

× I always write down I have to do things on paper and it put put it on my desk.

✓ I always write down the things I have to do on paper and put it on my desk.

The original sentence has repetition 'put put' and incorrect word order. Also, 'I have to do things' should be 'the things I have to do' for clarity and correct word order.

× my friend don't feel doesn't feel need to make a list for her daily routine.

✓ my friend doesn't feel the need to make a list for her daily routine.

The subject 'my friend' is singular, so the verb should be 'doesn't' not 'don't'. Also, 'feel need' is incorrect; it should be 'feel the need'.

× I guess some people think to make a list is bordered.

✓ I guess some people think making a list is boring.

The word 'bordered' is incorrect here; the correct adjective is 'boring' to describe something uninteresting.

× So I like write down on papers and put it on my desk.

✓ So I like to write things down on paper and put it on my desk.

The phrase 'write down on papers' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'write things down on paper'. Also, 'papers' should be singular 'paper' when referring to the material in general.

× It is the effective for me.

✓ It is effective for me.

The article 'the' is unnecessary before 'effective'. The correct phrase is 'It is effective for me.'