List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법적 오류가 있습니다. 'can off my eyes'와 같은 표현은 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 또한, 문장이 명확하지 않고 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 간결하고 명확한 문장으로 답변을 구성하고, 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하세요.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually make a shopping list. I prefer to buy items that catch my eye while I'm in the store.

Sugestão: 답변이 불완전하고 문장이 매끄럽지 않습니다. 'I try to do for a list'와 같은 표현은 부자연스럽고, 이유 설명도 명확하지 않습니다. 문장을 완성하고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list before starting work, but I often fail to complete it because I get distracted easily.

Sugestão: 답변이 다소 모호하고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'depends if people already have their routine' 대신 'depends on whether people already have a routine'가 자연스럽습니다. 또한, 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하고 연결어를 사용해 문장을 명확하게 만드세요.

Exemplo: Well, I think some people don't like making lists because they already have a routine and don't feel the need. Others prefer to be spontaneous and do things without planning.

Sugestão: 답변이 비교적 명확하지만, 문법과 어휘 사용에 오류가 있습니다. 'comp more comfortable on writing paper' 대신 'more comfortable to write on paper'가 자연스럽습니다. 문장을 간결하고 정확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer to make lists on paper because I rarely check my phone's schedule. Writing on paper feels more comfortable, and I keep the list on my desk.

× No, I don't make.

✓ No, I don't make a list.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks the object 'a list' after the verb 'make'. In English, 'make' requires an object to complete the meaning in this context. Adding 'a list' clarifies the action.

× I usually choose the items that can off my eyes.

✓ I usually choose the items that catch my eyes.

The phrase 'can off my eyes' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'catch my eyes', meaning items that attract attention. Using the correct verb and preposition is necessary for clarity.

× So what I mean is that I choose the item and buy, uh inside of my making list.

✓ So what I mean is that I choose the item and buy it without making a list.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Inside of my making list' is incorrect. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning by stating the action clearly and using proper structure.

× I try to do for a list, but I usually fail.

✓ I try to make a list, but I usually fail.

The phrase 'try to do for a list' is incorrect. The correct verb collocation is 'try to make a list'. Using the correct verb and preposition improves grammatical accuracy.

× This is because I don't really care about the.

✓ This is because I don't really care about it.

The sentence ends abruptly without an object. 'Care about' requires an object; 'it' refers to the list or task. Completing the sentence with the correct pronoun is necessary.

× Well, I think it depends if people already have their routine so they don't need to make a list, but in other case I think the people likes to do without making.

✓ Well, I think it depends on whether people already have their routine, so they don't need to make a list, but in other cases, I think people like to do things without making one.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'depends if' should be 'depends on whether'; 'in other case' should be 'in other cases'; 'the people likes' should be 'people like'; and 'without making' is incomplete. Correcting conjunctions, prepositions, and subject-verb agreement improves clarity.

× I think the people likes to do without making.

✓ I think people like to do things without making lists.

'People' is plural, so the verb should be 'like' not 'likes'. Also, the phrase 'do without making' is incomplete; specifying 'lists' clarifies the meaning.

× I rarely check my phone schedule up so I just I think it is comp more comfortable on writing paper and I put it on my desk.

✓ I rarely check my phone schedule, so I think it is more comfortable to write on paper, and I put it on my desk.

The original sentence has redundant pronouns and awkward phrasing. 'Schedule up' is incorrect; 'check my phone schedule' suffices. 'Comp more comfortable on writing paper' is unclear; corrected to 'more comfortable to write on paper'. Removing redundancy and correcting prepositions improves readability.