Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Well yes, I make list when I shop. It help me remember what I need to buy and keep me shopping for. Keep me for shopping so much money and I usually write it down on paper before I go.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I make a list for my work, it help me stay organize and focus on what I need to do and I use digital app to remind me my task and I feel good when I check thing off.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Maybe some people like to be flexible and they think making less take so much time, and they enjoy doing things as they think of them which make them feel free and easy.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Well, I preferred making plans by my phone and I always plan my week ahead. Using a planner app on my phone is really convenient because I can it can set me reminder no matter what I am what.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 你的回答有语法错误,表达不够流畅,且有些句子不完整。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式,避免重复和不连贯的表达。可以尝试用更自然的句子结构来表达你的观点。
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from spending too much money. I often write it down on paper before I go to the store.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误,如动词形式和冠词使用不当。建议注意句子结构,使用连接词使句子更连贯,同时丰富细节使回答更具体。
Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks. I use a digital app to remind me of my duties, and I feel satisfied when I check things off the list.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议注意主谓一致和时态,使用更准确的词汇表达原因,并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: Some people might dislike making lists because they prefer to be flexible. They think making lists takes too much time and enjoy doing things spontaneously, which makes them feel free and relaxed.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中有时态错误和句子不完整,表达不清晰。建议注意时态一致,避免重复,完善句子结构,使表达更自然流畅。
Exemplo: I prefer making plans on my phone and usually plan my week in advance. Using a planner app is very convenient because it can set reminders for me wherever I am.
× Well yes, I make list when I shop.
✓ Well yes, I make a list when I shop.
这里缺少冠词“a”,因为“list”是可数名词,单数形式前需要加冠词。
× It help me remember what I need to buy and keep me shopping for.
✓ It helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps me shopping.
主语是第三人称单数“it”,谓语动词应加-s,保持主谓一致。
× Keep me for shopping so much money and I usually write it down on paper before I go.
✓ It helps me save so much money and I usually write it down on paper before I go.
短语“keep me for shopping so much money”不符合英语习惯,应使用“save so much money”表示节省钱。
× Yes, I make a list for my work, it help me stay organize and focus on what I need to do and I use digital app to remind me my task and I feel good when I check thing off.
✓ Yes, I make a list for my work, it helps me stay organized and focus on what I need to do. I use a digital app to remind me of my tasks and I feel good when I check things off.
“it help”应为“it helps”,主谓一致;“stay organize”应为“stay organized”,形容词形式;“remind me my task”应为“remind me of my tasks”,介词使用错误;“check thing off”应为“check things off”,复数形式。
× Maybe some people like to be flexible and they think making less take so much time, and they enjoy doing things as they think of them which make them feel free and easy.
✓ Maybe some people like to be flexible and they think making lists takes so much time, and they enjoy doing things as they think of them which makes them feel free and easy.
“making less”应为“making lists”,复数形式;“take”应为“takes”,主谓一致;“which make”应为“which makes”,主谓一致。
× Well, I preferred making plans by my phone and I always plan my week ahead.
✓ Well, I prefer making plans on my phone and I always plan my week ahead.
此处表达习惯用现在时“prefer”,而非过去时“preferred”;“by my phone”应为“on my phone”,介词使用错误。
× Using a planner app on my phone is really convenient because I can it can set me reminder no matter what I am what.
✓ Using a planner app on my phone is really convenient because it can set me reminders no matter where I am.
“I can it can”重复,应删去“I can”;“set me reminder”应为“set me reminders”,复数形式;“no matter what I am what”表达不清,应为“no matter where I am”,介词和句式错误。