Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I usually make a list before go shopping because it helps me. Swap more efficiently and save my time. In addition, it helps me avoid forgetting anything important.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I will make A to do list for my study because it helps me stay more organized and clearly see what's clearly. See all the tasks I need to complete. For example, by writing down my assignments and dialogue, I can manage my time better and finish everything before the deadline.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Some people don't like making this because they prefer more flexible lifestyle. For example, they might feel rejected by a fixed plan and they can feel more freedom and adapt to an accepted situation before be.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer making lists on paper. I usually write them down on paper because it can make me feel a sense of achievement when I'm crossing something down.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“Swap more efficiently”应为“shop more efficiently”。建议注意动词形式和拼写,避免语法错误,同时回答应更连贯自然。
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list before going shopping because it helps me shop more efficiently and save time. In addition, it prevents me from forgetting anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答中有重复和语法错误,如“clearly see what's clearly”不通顺,且句子结构不完整。建议简洁表达,注意句子完整性和逻辑连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, I make a to-do list for my studies because it helps me stay organized and clearly see all the tasks I need to complete. For example, by writing down my assignments, I can manage my time better and finish everything before the deadline.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,如“making this”和“adapt to an accepted situation before be”不正确。建议使用正确短语,表达更清晰具体。
Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer a more flexible lifestyle. For example, they might feel restricted by a fixed plan and want to have more freedom to adapt to changing situations.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 75.0Sugestão: 回答较好,但可以使用更丰富的词汇和连接词,使表达更自然流畅。建议增加原因和感受的细节描述。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. Also, crossing off completed tasks gives me a satisfying sense of achievement.
× Yes, I usually make a list before go shopping because it helps me.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list before going shopping because it helps me.
在介词before后面,动词应使用动名词形式(-ing形式),所以go应改为going。
× Swap more efficiently and save my time.
✓ Shop more efficiently and save my time.
单词'swap'用错,应为'shop',表示购物。
× Yes, I will make A to do list for my study because it helps me stay more organized and clearly see what's clearly.
✓ Yes, I will make a to-do list for my study because it helps me stay more organized and clearly see what's clear.
'A to do list'应为'a to-do list',且句中重复使用'clearly',应改为形容词'clear'。
× See all the tasks I need to complete.
✓ I can see all the tasks I need to complete.
该句缺少主语和谓语,需补充完整句子。
× Some people don't like making this because they prefer more flexible lifestyle.
✓ Some people don't like making this because they prefer a more flexible lifestyle.
'more flexible lifestyle'前缺少冠词'a',表示单数可数名词。
× For example, they might feel rejected by a fixed plan and they can feel more freedom and adapt to an accepted situation before be.
✓ For example, they might feel restricted by a fixed plan and they can feel more freedom and adapt to an unexpected situation before it happens.
'rejected'用错,应为'restricted'(受限制);'accepted situation before be'表达不清,改为'unexpected situation before it happens'更通顺。
× I usually write them down on paper because it can make me feel a sense of achievement when I'm crossing something down.
✓ I usually write them down on paper because it can make me feel a sense of achievement when I'm crossing something off.
短语'cross something down'错误,正确表达是'cross something off',表示划掉。