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Part 1

Examinador

Do you make a list when you shop?

Candidato

No, I prefer to shop spontaneously and see what catches my eye. Making a list is unnecessary for me because I have a good memory. Besides, I really enjoy discovering new products.

Examinador

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Candidato

Definitely, yes. I often make list for my study. It helps me to stay organized and focused on my tasks. I usually write things down on my notebook or record them in my phone, which is pretty easy to check if I finish.

Examinador

Why don't some people like making lists?

Candidato

Some people find making lists is time consuming. They think it's a waste of time because they are probably confident with their memory. Moreover, they would like to start working directly sometimes.

Examinador

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Candidato

I prefer making a list on on paper. I really enjoy the feelings of crossing items off the list and moreover, it is really easier to remember things on the paper.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.5Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 6.0Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Pontuação: 85.0

Sugestão: 你的回答较为自然且内容完整,但可以增加一些具体细节来丰富答案,比如描述你如何凭记忆购物或举例说明发现新产品的经历。

Exemplo: No, I usually shop spontaneously because I trust my memory to remember what I need. For example, last week I bought some fresh fruits and snacks that caught my eye, which made shopping more enjoyable.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Pontuação: 90.0

Sugestão: 回答结构清晰且内容具体,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅,同时注意语法细节,如复数形式。

Exemplo: Definitely, I often make lists for my studies because they help me stay organized and focused. For instance, I write tasks in my notebook or record them on my phone, so I can easily check off completed items.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Pontuação: 88.0

Sugestão: 回答内容合理,但可以通过增加具体例子或原因来增强说服力,同时注意句子连接的自然性。

Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and believe their memory is reliable. For example, a friend of mine prefers to start tasks immediately without planning because it feels more efficient to him.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Pontuação: 87.0

Sugestão: 回答表达了个人偏好,但可以增加更多细节说明为什么纸质列表更有效,并使用更丰富的词汇。

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy the satisfaction of crossing off items. Also, writing by hand helps me remember tasks better compared to using my phone.

Gramática

Singular and plural issue

× I often make list for my study.

I often make lists for my study.

这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”,因为表示经常制作多个清单。单数形式不符合语境。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I usually write things down on my notebook or record them in my phone, which is pretty easy to check if I finish.

I usually write things down in my notebook or record them on my phone, which is pretty easy to check if I finish.

“write down”后面应该用介词“in”来表示写在笔记本里;“record”后面用“on”表示在手机上录入。原句介词使用错误。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer making a list on on paper.

I prefer making a list on paper.

“on on paper”中重复了“on”,应去掉一个。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× it is really easier to remember things on the paper.

it is really easier to remember things on paper.

“on the paper”中的定冠词“the”不必要,通常表达“在纸上”用“on paper”更自然。

Vocabulário

EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
PrettyAttractive; Quite; Beautify
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