List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: You need to make your answer more natural and clear. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you make a list, and give a specific example. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me buy only what I need. For instance, last week, my list saved me from buying unnecessary items, which helped me save money.

Sugestão: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly to connect your ideas. Avoid repeating words and improve sentence clarity. Also, provide a specific example to support your point.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me focus on important tasks and manage my time well. For example, last week, my list helped me complete all my assignments before the deadline.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and has many grammar mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and logically. Use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and provide a clear opinion with reasons.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and believe they can remember everything. However, this often leads to buying unnecessary items, which I don't agree with.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so I can easily check my list and avoid forgetting important items. In contrast, I often forget paper lists at home.

× I always make a list when I want to go for shopping.

✓ I always make a list when I want to go shopping.

The phrase 'go shopping' is a fixed expression and does not require the preposition 'for'. Using 'go for shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go shopping'. This is a common collocation in English.

× So the list will contain all the necessary things I need to buy and this will help me to buy a necessary thing rather than unnecessary thing.

✓ So the list will contain all the necessary things I need to buy and this will help me to buy necessary things rather than unnecessary things.

When referring to countable nouns in general, the plural form should be used. 'A necessary thing' and 'unnecessary thing' are singular, but here the meaning is general, so plural 'necessary things' and 'unnecessary things' is appropriate.

× I can remember last week so the least as soon as saving me.

✓ I remember last week the list saved me time.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. The intended meaning seems to be that the list helped save time last week. The corrected sentence uses proper structure and verb tense to convey this clearly.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work to make the necessary things I need to to do in time so that I will not spend my time on on necessary thing.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work to do the necessary things I need to do on time so that I will not spend my time on unnecessary things.

The phrase 'make the necessary things' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'do' for tasks. Also, 'on on necessary thing' has repetition and singular/plural errors. 'Unnecessary things' is the correct plural form. The phrase 'in time' is better as 'on time' when referring to punctuality.

× So it is working because it has saved a lot of my time and I will be able to work very adequately with time.

✓ So it is working because it has saved a lot of my time and I will be able to work very efficiently with time.

The adverb 'adequately' is not the best choice here. 'Efficiently' better expresses working well with time. 'Adequately' means just enough, but 'efficiently' means effectively and productively.

× And some people don't doesn't like making a list because they they depend on their on their brain.

✓ And some people don't like making a list because they depend on their brain.

The auxiliary verb 'don't' is used with plural subjects, so 'doesn't' is incorrect here. Also, repeated words 'they they' and 'on their on their' are errors and should be removed.

× They think that they can I got everything they want to buy.

✓ They think that they can get everything they want to buy.

The phrase 'they can I got' is ungrammatical. The correct modal verb phrase is 'they can get'. 'I got' is incorrect here and should be replaced with 'get'.

× So they will master it and they will resume.

✓ So they will master it and then resume.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'then' clarifies the sequence of actions. Also, 'resume' needs an object or context; assuming it means 'resume shopping' or 'resume their activity'.

× They will later realize they they are buying unnecessary thing.

✓ They will later realize they are buying unnecessary things.

'Unnecessary thing' should be plural 'unnecessary things' because it refers to multiple items.

× I prefer making a list on my phone 'cause my phone is with me everywhere, is with it's on my hand.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because my phone is with me everywhere; it is in my hand.

The phrase 'is with it's on my hand' is incorrect. 'It's' is a contraction for 'it is' or 'it has' and does not fit here. The correct phrase is 'it is in my hand'. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is better in formal speech.

× So I will be able to realize that I have make a list of something that necessary to buy.

✓ So I will be able to realize that I have made a list of something that is necessary to buy.

The verb 'make' should be in the past participle form 'made' after 'have'. Also, 'something that necessary' needs the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct.

× So I won't be forget, forget.

✓ So I won't forget.

The phrase 'be forget' is incorrect; 'forget' is a verb and does not need 'be'. Also, the repetition 'forget, forget' is unnecessary.

× But when whenever I make a list on paper, I will forget.

✓ But whenever I make a list on paper, I will forget.

Using both 'when' and 'whenever' together is redundant. Choose one; 'whenever' is appropriate here.