List— Part 1 Relatório

× Yes, whenever I go to shopping I do make a list because I have one bad habit which is I really forgot to buy what was I was supposed to buy that really make me regret after I came home.

✓ Yes, whenever I go shopping I do make a list because I have one bad habit which is I really forget to buy what I was supposed to buy and that really makes me regret it after I come home.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' should be followed directly by the gerund 'shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'forgot' should be in present tense 'forget' to match the habitual action. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'that'. 'Was I was' is redundant; it should be 'I was'. 'Regret after I came home' should be 'regret it after I come home' to maintain present tense for habitual actions.

× Yes, I always make a list when I when I am working because I have a tendency to forget important things. This often make me regret it later when I realize I miss something to do or make which I have to work.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I am working because I have a tendency to forget important things. This often makes me regret it later when I realize I missed something to do or make which I have to work on.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'This'. 'Miss' should be in past tense 'missed' to match the past realization. The phrase 'which I have to work' is incomplete; it should be 'which I have to work on' to be grammatically correct.

× Firstly, it is really hard to make a list. The people who have a forgetting habits, it will for them it will be a best thing to make a list, but somewhere it's really brother think.

✓ Firstly, it is really hard to make a list. For people who have a habit of forgetting, it will be the best thing to make a list, but sometimes it's really a bother to think about.

The phrase 'have a forgetting habits' is incorrect; it should be 'have a habit of forgetting' to use the correct preposition and singular form. 'It will for them it will be a best thing' is redundant and awkward; simplified to 'it will be the best thing'. 'Brother think' is incorrect; likely meant 'bother to think'.

× Most of the time I prefer to make a list on paper because we never trust our phone. It would be lost, people will be also lost. But people do have one benefit. We can put it anywhere, like in our pack, such as pockets. On the other hand, mobile.

✓ Most of the time I prefer to make a list on paper because I never trust my phone. It could be lost, and people can also lose it. But there is one benefit: we can put it anywhere, like in our bag, such as pockets. On the other hand, mobile phones...

The pronouns 'we' and 'our' are inconsistent with the speaker's perspective; should be 'I' and 'my'. 'People will be also lost' is unclear; corrected to 'people can also lose it'. 'Pack' is incorrect; should be 'bag'. The last sentence is incomplete but corrected for clarity.