Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. It helps me stay oriented and ensures that I don't forget any important items. For example, when I shop for families, having a list saves me time and is unnecessary purchase.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I usually make it for my work to stay arranged and ensure I don't forget important tasks. It differently works because it helps me prioritize my 30s and management had more efficiently.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
In my opinion, I think on the one hand maybe they have a very good memories to lead them, can't forget what tasks have they to do, but on the other hand maybe they have a little tired.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think if I make a list on paper I will forget, forget to take it or lose it. But if it on my phone I can locate it every time.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但有些语法错误和表达不够自然。例如,“is unnecessary purchase”应为“prevents unnecessary purchases”。建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配,使表达更地道。
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items. For example, when I shop for my family, having a list saves me time and prevents unnecessary purchases.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,如“It differently works”和“prioritize my 30s and management had more efficiently”不符合英语习惯。建议简化句子,使用正确的词汇表达工作清单的作用。
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a list for my work to stay organized and make sure I don't forget important tasks. It definitely works because it helps me prioritize my tasks and manage my time more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,如“have a very good memories to lead them”和“maybe they have a little tired”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,清晰说明原因。
Exemplo: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember their tasks easily. On the other hand, some might find making lists tiring or time-consuming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答表达了观点,但有重复和语法错误,如“forget, forget to take it”。建议简化句子,避免重复,并使用正确的语法。
Exemplo: I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I use paper, I might forget to bring it or lose it. With my phone, I can always access the list easily.
× For example, when I shop for families, having a list saves me time and is unnecessary purchase.
✓ For example, when I shop for families, having a list saves me time and prevents unnecessary purchases.
这里的“unnecessary purchase”应该用复数形式“unnecessary purchases”,因为指的是多项不必要的购买。英语中可数名词在泛指多个时需用复数形式。
× It differently works because it helps me prioritize my 30s and management had more efficiently.
✓ It works differently because it helps me prioritize my tasks and manage them more efficiently.
“differently”应放在动词后面,且“my 30s”应为“my tasks”,另外“management had more efficiently”结构错误,应改为“manage them more efficiently”。这里涉及形容词、副词位置和词汇选择错误。
× In my opinion, I think on the one hand maybe they have a very good memories to lead them, can't forget what tasks have they to do, but on the other hand maybe they have a little tired.
✓ In my opinion, on the one hand, maybe they have very good memories to guide them and can't forget what tasks they have to do, but on the other hand, maybe they are a little tired.
“a very good memories”中“memories”是复数,前面不应加不定冠词“a”;“to lead them”应为“to guide them”;“can't forget what tasks have they to do”语序错误,应为“what tasks they have to do”;“have a little tired”应为“are a little tired”,因为“tired”是形容词,需用系动词。
× But if it on my phone I can locate it every time.
✓ But if it is on my phone, I can locate it every time.
句子缺少系动词“is”,导致语法错误。正确结构应为“if it is on my phone”。