List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. Try to be more direct and concise. Use simple and natural phrases, and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to keep track of the groceries I need. This helps me avoid forgetting important items and saves time while shopping.

Sugestão: Your answer has pronunciation issues and unclear phrases like 'I shot licks'. Also, the response is vague and lacks coherence. Try to clearly state your practice and explain how it helps you, using linking words for clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks. It helps me stay organized and complete my work efficiently because I can prioritize important tasks.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Avoid contradicting phrases and unclear ideas. Provide a clear reason why some people avoid making lists, and support it with an example or explanation.

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or feel it limits their flexibility. For example, they may prefer to remember tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and slightly unclear at the end. Try to be more concise and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me. This way, I can easily check my list anytime without worrying about losing a paper note.

× Yes, I make a list when I'm willing to shop because I shortlist the things which I'm needing and I would just love to have the things in my groceries or whatever things are remaining.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I'm willing to shop because I shortlist the things which I need and I would just love to have the things in my groceries or whatever things are remaining.

The verb 'need' should be in its base form here instead of the '-ing' form 'needing' because it follows the verb 'am' in a relative clause describing the things. Using 'needing' is incorrect in this context. Use the base form 'need' to express necessity.

× Yes, I shot licks. I shortlist the things I need and it really works very efficiently and I would just love to do research on that.

✓ Yes, I shortlist. I shortlist the things I need and it really works very efficiently and I would just love to do research on that.

The phrase 'shot licks' seems to be a mispronunciation or typo for 'shortlist'. Correcting it to 'shortlist' makes the sentence grammatically and semantically correct.

× I think people have trouble making lists because they have lack of knowledge since they don't have lack of. Since they have lack of knowledge, they tend to make mistakes.

✓ I think people have trouble making lists because they lack knowledge. Since they lack knowledge, they tend to make mistakes.

The phrase 'have lack of knowledge' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'lack knowledge' without 'have' or 'of'. Also, the sentence 'they don't have lack of' is incomplete and incorrect. Simplifying to 'they lack knowledge' is grammatically correct and clearer.

× That's an interesting question. I prefer to list all the things which I need in my phone as I use my phone on daily purpose and I don't really keep my things on paper because I think I just won't read it.

✓ That's an interesting question. I prefer to list all the things which I need on my phone as I use my phone daily and I don't really keep my things on paper because I think I just won't read it.

The phrase 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' because we say 'on' when referring to devices like phones or computers. Also, 'on daily purpose' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'daily' or 'every day'.

× So whenever I have a phone I just just grab my phone and just read it out. What things?

✓ So whenever I have my phone, I just grab it and read the list. What things?

The sentence has repetition ('just just') and awkward phrasing. 'Grab my phone and just read it out' is better expressed as 'grab it and read the list'. Also, 'What things?' is unclear and should be rephrased or clarified depending on context.