Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
I will now make a list when I shop because I spend a little time to shopping to shop in the supermarkets and I need to think about many of things when I'm shopping, so I will not make a list.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, I will definitely make a list for my work because it makes me feel feel convenient and some something is easy to follow to focus on. But sometimes I will not follow my plan because because sometimes I'm.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
Some people don't like to make lists because they think their times are free for them. They don't want to make many restriction or something to distract them from doing the things they want to do.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
I prefer to make a list on my phone. That's because sometimes it's not convenient to take out a paper or a pen to write something on it. But I bring my phone every time and anywhere so I can write it directly.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰,存在语法错误和重复,建议简化句子结构,直接回答问题,并用连词连接补充细节。
Exemplo: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I spend only a short time in supermarkets. However, sometimes I make a list to remember important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答中有重复词汇和不完整句子,表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题,避免重复,并补充具体原因。
Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. However, sometimes I don't follow the list if unexpected tasks come up.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答较为清晰,但用词和语法有待改进。建议使用更准确的词汇和连词,使表达更自然流畅。
Exemplo: Some people dislike making lists because they value their free time and feel that lists restrict their freedom or distract them from what they enjoy doing.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答较好,但句子结构可以更简洁,避免重复。建议使用连词连接句子,使表达更流畅。
Exemplo: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I always carry my phone, so I can quickly add items anytime without needing paper or pen.
× I will now make a list when I shop because I spend a little time to shopping to shop in the supermarkets and I need to think about many of things when I'm shopping, so I will not make a list.
✓ I will now make a list when I shop because I spend a little time shopping in the supermarkets and I need to think about many things when I'm shopping, so I will not make a list.
动词后接动名词时,应该用动词的-ing形式,而不是不定式或其他形式。这里'spend'后面应该接'shopping',而不是'to shopping'。
× I will now make a list when I shop because I spend a little time to shopping to shop in the supermarkets and I need to think about many of things when I'm shopping, so I will not make a list.
✓ I will now make a list when I shop because I spend a little time shopping in the supermarkets and I need to think about many things when I'm shopping, so I will not make a list.
'many of things'是不正确的表达,正确用法是'many things',不需要介词'of'。
× I will now make a list when I shop because I spend a little time to shopping to shop in the supermarkets and I need to think about many of things when I'm shopping, so I will not make a list.
✓ I will now make a list when I shop because I spend a little time shopping in the supermarkets and I need to think about many things when I'm shopping, so I will not make a list.
句子结构混乱,重复使用了'to shopping to shop',应简化为'spending a little time shopping',使句子更通顺。
× Some people don't like to make lists because they think their times are free for them.
✓ Some people don't like to make lists because they think their time is free for them.
'times'在这里应使用不可数名词'time',表示时间的概念,且主语是单数,谓语动词也应相应调整。
× They don't want to make many restriction or something to distract them from doing the things they want to do.
✓ They don't want to make many restrictions or something to distract them from doing the things they want to do.
'restriction'是可数名词,复数形式应为'restrictions',与'many'搭配使用。
× But sometimes I will not follow my plan because because sometimes I'm.
✓ But sometimes I will not follow my plan because sometimes I'm not sure.
句子不完整,缺少谓语部分,导致表达不清楚。应补充完整,使句子完整通顺。