List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, clarify your ideas with more precise language and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying 'I have a list in my mind and every time I go out I just check for in my brain', you could say 'I usually keep a mental list and review it when I go shopping.'

Exemplo: I don't usually write a shopping list, but I keep a mental list that I review before I go out to make sure I don't forget anything.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Focus on structuring your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid filler words. For example, say 'Yes, I make lists for work to prioritise tasks, which helps me work more efficiently.'

Exemplo: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me prioritise tasks and manage my time better, so I can be more efficient.

Sugestão: Avoid informal contractions like 'cause' and filler words. Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer explanations. For example, 'Some people find making lists complicated and time-consuming because they prefer to keep things in their mind, so they think lists are unnecessary.'

Exemplo: Some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated and time-consuming, and they prefer to remember things mentally, so they feel lists are unnecessary.

Sugestão: Try to improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because I find it more efficient and my handwriting has become poor since I rarely write by hand.'

Exemplo: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient, and since I don't write by hand often, my handwriting has become quite poor.

× I do make it looks for my work umm see like uh doing different prioritize test and take less effort of doing different attacks.

✓ I do make it look for my work, umm, see, like, doing different prioritised tasks and taking less effort in doing different tasks.

The verb 'make' should be followed by the base form 'look' not 'looks' (Verb + -ing form error). Also, 'prioritize test' is incorrect; it should be 'prioritised tasks' to correctly use the verb as an adjective and plural noun. 'Take less effort of doing different attacks' is awkward and unclear; it is corrected to 'taking less effort in doing different tasks' to use the gerund form properly and clarify meaning.

× I do make it looks for my work umm see like uh doing different prioritize test and take less effort of doing different attacks.

✓ I do make it look for my work, umm, see, like, doing different prioritised tasks and taking less effort in doing different tasks.

The phrase 'take less effort of doing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in' as in 'taking less effort in doing'. Prepositions must be used correctly to convey the intended meaning.

× Not really. Uh, I don't like to make plans when I go out. Umm, but actually I have a list in my mind and every time I go out I just check for in my brain.

✓ Not really. Uh, I don't like to make plans when I go out. Umm, but actually I have a list in my mind and every time I go out I just check it in my brain.

The phrase 'check for in my brain' is incorrect; the pronoun 'it' should be used to refer to the list. Using the correct pronoun improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× 'Cause making this is such a complicated thing, it uh, waste timing on listing everything.

✓ 'Cause making this is such a complicated thing, it uh, wastes time listing everything.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'making this', which is singular, so the verb should be 'wastes' (third person singular). Also, 'waste timing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'wastes time'. This correction addresses both pronoun-verb agreement and word choice.

× Just it was already in your mind, it was completely useless.

✓ Since it is already in your mind, it is completely useless.

The original sentence uses past tense 'was' which is inconsistent with the present context. Changing to present tense 'is' aligns with the ongoing state being described.

× I always make lists on my phone. I don't really like physical listing scenes.

✓ I always make lists on my phone. I don't really like physical lists.

The phrase 'physical listing scenes' is awkward and incorrect. The correct phrase is 'physical lists' to describe lists on paper as opposed to digital.

× I haven't been to school for so long have them pick up a pen so my writing must getting really bad.

✓ I haven't been to school for so long that I haven't picked up a pen, so my writing must be getting really bad.

The original sentence has tense and structure errors. 'Have them pick up a pen' is incorrect; it should be 'I haven't picked up a pen'. Also, 'must getting' should be 'must be getting' to form the correct present continuous modal structure.

× I don't really like to look at them so I will write it on my phone more efficient.

✓ I don't really like to look at them, so I write them on my phone more efficiently.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'lists' (plural), so 'them' is correct. Also, 'more efficient' is an adjective; the adverb 'more efficiently' should be used to modify the verb 'write'.