List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'what to buy and what I need', you could say 'to remind me of the items I need to purchase'. Also, correct phrases like 'not great in remember' to 'not good at remembering'.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I'm not very good at remembering everything, so I like to jot down notes on my phone to remind me of the items I need to buy. This also helps me assist others when shopping. Overall, it's a really useful way to ensure I don't forget anything.

Sugestão: Focus on clearer sentence structure and correct grammar. Use linking words like 'especially' appropriately and avoid awkward phrases such as 'to remind me to doing that at time'. Also, replace 'so I can forget anything' with 'so I don't forget anything'.

Exemplo: Yes, I always make a list for my work, which is very valuable and helpful. Especially when I have a busy schedule, I include all tasks in the list to remind me to complete them on time. It's an effective way to manage everything and ensure I don't forget anything.

Sugestão: Clarify your ideas and use correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases like 'not that easier' and 'more managed and organized just'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'or' properly to connect reasons. Try to be more specific about why some people dislike lists.

Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be more flexible rather than strictly organised. Others might find making lists troublesome or time-consuming. Additionally, some people rely on their memory instead of writing things down.

Sugestão: Improve your answer by using more natural expressions and clearer explanations. For example, instead of 'type of old school person', say 'old-fashioned person'. Also, explain why writing helps you remember better, and avoid informal phrases like 'lose my mind'.

Exemplo: I'm a bit old-fashioned, so I prefer making lists on paper or in notebooks. I enjoy writing notes and using coloured pens because it helps me organise my thoughts and remember things better. Without this method, I might easily forget important tasks.

× Actually I'm not great in remember everything so I would like to put down the notes on my phone to remind me what to buy and what I need.

✓ Actually I'm not great at remembering everything so I would like to put down notes on my phone to remind me what to buy and what I need.

The phrase 'great in remember' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'great at' followed by the gerund form 'remembering'. Also, 'put down the notes' should be 'put down notes' as 'notes' is general here.

× Actually I'm not great in remember everything so I would like to put down the notes on my phone to remind me what to buy and what I need.

✓ Actually I'm not great at remembering everything so I would like to put down notes on my phone to remind me what to buy and what I need.

After 'great at', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'remember' should be 'remembering'.

× Also what I will probably help other people to buy.

✓ Also, I will probably help other people to buy things.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'What I will probably help other people to buy' lacks a clear subject and object. It should be rephrased for clarity.

× It's really helpful as a reminder which I won't forget anything.

✓ It's really helpful as a reminder so that I won't forget anything.

The phrase 'which I won't forget anything' is incorrect. 'So that' is the correct conjunction to express purpose here.

× I do have a list for my work and which is really valuable and helpful during all my work.

✓ I do have a list for my work, which is really valuable and helpful throughout my work.

The phrase 'and which' is incorrect; it should be 'which' to introduce a relative clause. Also, 'during all my work' is better expressed as 'throughout my work'.

× Especially when I have a package schedule, I will put everything in the list to remind me to doing that at time.

✓ Especially when I have a package schedule, I put everything on the list to remind me to do that on time.

The correct preposition is 'on the list' not 'in the list'. Also, 'to doing' should be 'to do', and 'at time' should be 'on time'.

× It's actually a great way to manage all the things so I can forget anything.

✓ It's actually a great way to manage all the things so I don't forget anything.

The phrase 'so I can forget anything' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'so I don't forget anything'.

× I guess that's because they would like to be more flexible than being totally managed.

✓ I guess that's because they would like to be more flexible rather than being totally managed.

The phrase 'more flexible than being totally managed' is awkward; 'rather than' is a better conjunction to express preference.

× Or some of them they just don't like to take any list because they think that's a big trouble or not that easier.

✓ Or some of them just don't like to make any list because they think it's a big trouble or not that easy.

The phrase 'some of them they' is redundant; 'some of them' suffices. Also, 'take any list' should be 'make any list', and 'not that easier' should be 'not that easy'.

× Also I heard some of them it's just can't remember everything in their brain.

✓ Also, I heard some of them just can't remember everything in their brain.

The phrase 'some of them it's just can't' is incorrect; 'some of them just can't' is correct.

× They are more managed and organized just.

✓ They are just more managed and organized.

The placement of 'just' is awkward; it should be placed before 'more' for clarity.

× I would like to make everything on my paper or notebooks.

✓ I would like to make everything on my paper or in my notebooks.

The correct preposition is 'in' for notebooks, as you write inside them, but 'on' is acceptable for paper.

× That's because I enjoy writing some notes or using some color pens to help organize my memory and brain.

✓ That's because I enjoy writing notes or using coloured pens to help organise my memory and brain.

'Some notes' and 'some color pens' are better as 'notes' and 'coloured pens' for natural usage. Also, 'organize' and 'color' are American spellings; in Australian English, 'organise' and 'coloured' are preferred.

× Otherwise I could totally lose my mind if I don't do that.

✓ Otherwise, I could totally lose my mind if I don't do that.

A comma after 'Otherwise' improves sentence clarity.