Part 1
Examinador
Do you make a list when you shop?
Candidato
Yes I do, sometimes when I prepare for camping or some family event I will make a list for shopping to ensure everything I have remember.
Examinador
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Candidato
Yes, absolutely. I make a list for work every day because my work is office work. I need to make something, make sure something is stable and I need some details, so I must make.
Examinador
Why don't some people like making lists?
Candidato
I think some people don't like making this because they have a good memory or they are very confident with their brain.
Examinador
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Candidato
Actually, I prefer to make a list on my computer. Not my not, not on paper or my phone. Because the computer screen is big enough list is can more clearly clear.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Pontuação: 65.0Sugestão: 回答时语法和表达不够准确,句子结构较为混乱,建议加强语法练习,尤其是时态和冠词的使用。同时,回答可以更简洁自然,避免冗余。
Exemplo: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when preparing for camping trips or family events, to make sure I don't forget anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答内容不够清晰,表达含糊,缺少具体细节和逻辑连接词。建议练习用更明确的句子表达原因和细节,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Exemplo: Yes, I make a list every day for my office work because it helps me organize tasks and ensure nothing is overlooked.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Pontuação: 70.0Sugestão: 回答较为简单,表达基本清楚,但用词不够准确,且缺少连接词。建议丰富词汇,使用更自然的表达,并加入连接词使句子更流畅。
Exemplo: I think some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and feel confident they can remember everything without writing it down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题,句子结构混乱。建议加强句子结构和语法练习,表达时注意逻辑和连贯性。
Exemplo: Actually, I prefer to make lists on my computer because the larger screen makes it easier to see everything clearly, rather than using paper or my phone.
× I will make a list for shopping to ensure everything I have remember.
✓ I will make a list for shopping to ensure everything I have remembered.
这里需要使用过去分词形式"remembered",因为前面有助动词"have",构成现在完成时态。
× I need to make something, make sure something is stable and I need some details, so I must make.
✓ I need to make something, make sure something is stable, and I need some details, so I must do it.
句子结构不完整,最后的"so I must make"缺少宾语,应该补充完整使句子通顺。
× I think some people don't like making this because they have a good memory or they are very confident with their brain.
✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory or they are very confident in their brain.
"making this"指代不明确,应改为"making lists"。"confident with their brain"搭配不当,正确用法是"confident in their brain"。
× Actually, I prefer to make a list on my computer. Not my not, not on paper or my phone.
✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on my computer. Not on paper or my phone.
"Not my not"是多余且错误的表达,应删除以保持句子通顺。
× Because the computer screen is big enough list is can more clearly clear.
✓ Because the computer screen is big enough, the list can be clearer.
原句语序混乱,"more clearly clear"重复且错误,应改为"can be clearer",表达更准确。