List— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이도록 문장을 간결하게 만들고, 중복되는 표현을 피하세요. 예를 들어, 'I make a list when I go shopping, especially to grocery stores, because I like to plan ahead as an ISTJ.'처럼 표현할 수 있습니다.

Exemplo: I usually make a shopping list, especially for groceries, because I like to plan ahead as an ISTJ.

Sugestão: 문장을 완성하고 명확하게 표현하세요. 예를 들어, 'I make a to-do list before studying, which helped me a lot when I prepared for the CPA exam because I could check off completed tasks.'처럼 말할 수 있습니다.

Exemplo: I make a to-do list before studying, which helped me a lot when I prepared for the CPA exam because I could check off completed tasks.

Sugestão: 더 자연스럽고 명확한 이유를 제시하세요. 예를 들어, 'Some people find making to-do lists burdensome because it takes time, and they may feel it's inefficient, so they prefer to act immediately.'라고 표현할 수 있습니다.

Exemplo: Some people find making to-do lists burdensome because it takes time, and they may feel it's inefficient, so they prefer to act immediately.

Sugestão: 문장을 더 자연스럽게 연결하고 문법을 개선하세요. 예를 들어, 'I prefer making lists on paper, especially in my diary, which I buy new every year. However, I quickly note new ideas on my phone because it's more convenient.'라고 말할 수 있습니다.

Exemplo: I prefer making lists on paper, especially in my diary, which I buy new every year. However, I quickly note new ideas on my phone because it's more convenient.

× I do make a list when I go to shopping, especially when I go to a grocery store.

✓ I do make a list when I go shopping, especially when I go to a grocery store.

In English, the verb 'go' is followed by the base form of another verb without 'to' when expressing activities, so 'go shopping' is correct, not 'go to shopping'.

× I make a list of shopping.

✓ I make a shopping list.

The phrase 'make a list of shopping' is awkward; the correct expression is 'make a shopping list' where 'shopping' acts as an adjective describing the list.

× For example, my MBTI is ISTJ and since I like to plan things.

✓ For example, my MBTI is ISTJ, and I like to plan things.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'Since' introduces a reason and requires a complete clause; removing 'since' and connecting the ideas properly improves clarity.

× Especially I make A to do list before I start studying.

✓ Especially, I make a to-do list before I start studying.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list' to be grammatically correct.

× When I was studying CPA exam, it worked very well because I was making a check mark when.

✓ When I was studying for the CPA exam, it worked very well because I was making check marks.

The phrase 'studying CPA exam' needs the preposition 'for'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'when' which is incomplete; removing it and correcting 'making a check mark' to plural 'check marks' improves clarity.

× I think some people don't like to make A to do list because it is kinda a burden for them.

✓ I think some people don't like to make a to-do list because it is kind of a burden for them.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'kinda' is informal; 'kind of' is more appropriate in formal speech.

× For example, making A to do list takes time, so they might think it's ineffective or inefficient, so they just do it right.

✓ For example, making a to-do list takes time, so they might think it's ineffective or inefficient, so they just do it right away.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, 'do it right' is incomplete; 'do it right away' is the correct phrase.

× I do prefer to make a list on my paper, especially in my Diaries.

✓ I do prefer to make a list on paper, especially in my diary.

'My paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. 'Diaries' is plural but here it should be singular 'diary' as referring to a personal notebook.

× That's why every year I buy a new diary to make A to do list.

✓ That's why every year I buy a new diary to make a to-do list.

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'.

× However, when I get a new idea, I just right away in my phone because it's more convenient.

✓ However, when I get a new idea, I just write it right away in my phone because it's more convenient.

The verb 'right' is incorrect; it should be 'write'. Also, 'write it right away' is the correct phrase to express immediate action.